Newguest  +  381986 Wed, 20 Jun 07 12:36 PM Hi what do you think about this. it's about law office's services 1. We provide our clients with the most effective legal advice within the scope of:  professional training of the employees for purposes of claims management in the company. (Is it OK to write "for purposes") economic arbitration by cooperation with Arbitration Court of Commerce mediations concerning financial claims legal representation in negotiations with debtors and court representation in assigned cases. What do You think? Newguest Joined on Sun, Feb 25 2007 Senior Member 2,098

	Mister Micawber  +  382101 Wed, 20 Jun 07 03:03 PM I think it's basically fine, but stuffily styled.  Some polishing: We provide our clients with expert legal advice in the areas of:  - Professional training for company employees in claims management-- (Is it OK to write "for purposes"-- too wordy)  - Economic arbitration through cooperation with the Arbitration Court of Commerce -- (I don't know what 'economic arbitration' is, though.) - Mediation of financial claims - Legal representation in negotiations with debtors and court representation in assigned cases Mister Micawber Joined on Wed, Aug 4 2004 Yokohama Veteran Member 30,780 'The question is,' said Humpty Dumpty, 'which is to be master-- that's all.'