Hi,
I've suggested a few changes.
However, as noted earlier in the thread, in Western culture we don't write this kind of letter, so really it is best for you to decide what you want to say.
In the West, we get a certain amount, eg 2 or 3 weeks, of paid vacation each year. When we want to take time off, we ask for permission to take some of our vacation days.
Do you get paid for your leave days?
Best wishes, Clive
Sir,
Sub: Request leave for two days – reg.
As I am going to attend a family wedding function that will be held from 29.03.07 to 30.03.07 in my home town, I request that you give me leave for those two days.
Thanking you,
Yours faithfully,
Sasikumar.S