Nowadays there are greater and greater desires for (Too bloody much!) Nowadays there is a need (your use of comparatives - faster, more reliable, safer - makes "greater and greater" unnecessary, or somewhat redundant.) for a faster etc system which demands a / the precise choice
technology. But this (sentence is too long) "well known" hyphenated??
, but is still in the initial way and is going to be improved, consider using parentheses here?? (but / which is still in the initial stages etc.
Authors of research work Researchers Too wordy!
The system consists of a microcontroller, an RFID etc., etc. ( if these items are singular you should use the article)
If a compteitor the RFID reader and passes it through?? The microcontroller then saves it All of these singular nouns to the end of your piece need articles!!!
I'm beginning to wonder what you mean by a "competitor." Are we talking about industrial espionage here, or sales??? Is this suspect a client, or a customer, or what?
along accurate time of detection Do you mean, "along with the exact time of detection"?
I never heard "orienteering." sorry.
that logicality of usage RFID station "the logistical placement of the RFID station"? "the logical location for the RFID station"???
is partially conditional with GSM plug-in "is dependent on the availability of GSM plug-ins" ??
In your last sentence, I'm still confused as to what you mean by "comptetions" or "competitors."