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#122062 Thu, 28 Jul 05 11:13 AM

I want to send a letter, but my inglish is very bad, I need a little help...This is the letter, please suggest to me the right form, thak you. Silvia.

"Dear Hiroko and "Revive Time" Kaki Tree Project friend,

whit this message we want to inform you about the commemoration of atom bombs were dropped in Japan that we have organize in Brescia (Italy).

On 9 of August, at 5 p.m., in Santa Giulia (a place where is a bombed kaki tree jr. of Nagasaki), with a delegation of Comune di Brescia, are presenting: Dr Shinji Nishiyama (Japan consul) and mr Tanaka Shozo (Survived of Hirishima that lives near Brescia).

See you.

Thank you for any helps!

Anonymous

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nona the brit

#122076 Thu, 28 Jul 05 12:23 PM

We are writing to inform you about a ceremony to commemorate (possibly use 'mark' rather tan commemorate?) the dropping of atom bombs on Japan during the Second World War. This will be held in Brescia, Italy on 9th August at 5pm.

The ceremony will be held in Santa Giulia, where there is a tree (that survived the bombing of?) Nagasaki by a delegation of Comuni di Bescia. Presentations will be made by Dr Shinji Nishiyama, the Japanese consul, and Mr Tanaka Shozo, a Hiroshima survivor now living near Brescia.

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