I want to send a letter, but my inglish is very bad, I need a little help...This is the letter, please suggest to me the right form, thak you. Silvia.
"Dear Hiroko and "Revive Time" Kaki Tree Project friend,
whit this message we want to inform you about the commemoration of atom bombs were dropped in Japan that we have organize in Brescia (Italy).
On 9 of August, at 5 p.m., in Santa Giulia (a place where is a bombed kaki tree jr. of Nagasaki), with a delegation of Comune di Brescia, are presenting: Dr Shinji Nishiyama (Japan consul) and mr Tanaka Shozo (Survived of Hirishima that lives near Brescia).
See you.
Thank you for any helps!