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Latest post Mon, Jan 12 2004 5:14 PM by Guest. 1 replies.
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Mon, 12 Jan 04 05:14 PM
kindly correct this letter given below
Dear xxx
I don’t know what to write and how to write. Anyway, how are you. studying well? How is everyone at home? Fine? Here we all are fine.
I want to know one thing, that, what art youcalling your parents. Janaury last I’m going to ppp. Just to meet my friends and to subbmit my project. When will you going for that course? I think you are so busy. No?
Ok, then I’m stopping here. If you have time replay me. Bye.
With regards
xxx
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suzi
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Mon, 12 Jan 04 06:30 PM
I would suggest these alterations:
Dear xxx
I don’t know what to write or how to write. Anyway, how are you? Studying well? How is everyone at home? Fine? Here, we all are fine.
I want to know one thing, that is: what are your parents called?
Janaury last (?? do not know what you mean??) I’m going to ppp. Just to meet my friends and to submit my project. When will you be going for that course? I suppose you are so busy. No?
Ok, then I’m stopping here. If you have time. please reply to me. Bye.
With regards
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