Letter

I'm a student from final year of university preparation where we have to write a letter for our graduation in English. I'd like to have it checked, Thanks



24 February 2005,

Dear Sir/Madam,

After secondary school I went to a teachers' training college which I hope to graduate from at the end of April. Before staring a teaching job I would like to see as much as possible from the world.

I read your advertisment in: "Elsvier Weekblad". I want the job as tour director. I think I am suited for the job since I had a similar job a year ago.

I am available from the beginning of May till the end of August I would also like to say some about my excellent command of speaking English. I went to a lot of countries on holiday. These were all English speaking countries. I also went on excursion in some Mediterrenean countries, also English speaking. I want to know everything there is about the training course and my salary. I am availeble for an interview in week 22. I enclose a copy of my curriculum vitae. I hope te hear from you soon.

yours faithfully,


Bob van den Bergh