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Fizzi

#481794 Tue, 26 Feb 08 09:52 AM

Can somebody please help me with sentences?
Regards,
Fizzi

1-An extension of the scholarship will not only enable me to complete my master thesis, but also, to produce a high quality master work.
2- In addition, it will provide me with the opportunity to attend and present my research work in international conferences.
3. Similar application by another master candidate, (name of a candidate) from the University of S has been approved by the department of Y.

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#481842 Tue, 26 Feb 08 01:10 PM

1-An extension of the scholarship will enable me not only to complete my master's thesis, but also to produce a high quality master work. ['Master work' may be very wrong-- I don't know what you mean by this]

2- In addition, it will provide me with the opportunity to attend international conferences and present my research.

3. Similar application by another master candidate, (name of a candidate) from the University of S has been approved by the department of Y. -- This is an inappropriate idea to include in your applicaton; what other candidates have experienced is not relevant to your own merit.