I've been writing this letter over and over and over and I am still think that is very wordy. I want to introduce my company with a clear message, easy to read and easy to understand. Can someone help me with better ideas? I'm desperate : (

Dear (name)

At **COMPANY NAME **, we provides top quality Spanish Translation services at excellent rates. We translate from Spanish to English and English to Spanish.

Our broad experience in translations have been helping companies to extend their business across cultures by improving communication with their customers making clear the message through the information in their written documents

We are offering high quality language translations by native speaking qualified translators. In fact the innate knowledge of a native speaker assures that the translation will be easily understood by its audience and convey the tone and emphasis of the original document.

Our Translation Services are composed of the following:
• General documents: Translations of Letters, Brochures, Handbooks, Invitations, Newsletters, Articles, E-Mails, And Faxes.
• Technical: Translation of Manuals, Guides, and Instructions.
• Marketing: Translation of Websites, Business Cards, Posters, Power Point Presentations, Labels, CD / DVD / Book Covers, and Other Types of Marketing Documents

At ** COMPANY NAME** you will have a fast, accurate and reliable Spanish translation services. Exceptional customer service and superior quality. Translations performed by our team of native speaker translators. Documents are edited and proofread at no extra charge. Competitive rates without compromising the quality of the translated documents and fast turnaround at no extra costs. Translation discounts for non-profit Organizations and first-time clients.

Please do not hesitate to contact us to discuss how we can together increase business in Spanish-speaking markets for your company.
Sincerely,
New Member16
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Dear (name)

At **COMPANY NAME **, we provides top quality Spanish/English Translation services at excellent rates. We translate from Spanish to English and English to Spanish.
Our broad experience in translations We specialize in have been helping companies to extend their business across cultures by improving communication with their customer base. making clear the message through the information in their written documents
We are offering high quality language translations by Our employees are native speakers who are also qualified translators, so .. In fact the innate knowledge of a native speaker assures that the our translations will be not only grammatically accurate and completely fluent, but easy to understand easily understood by its audience while conveying the tone and emphasis of your original document. We strive for the fastest turnaround time, and never charge for proofreading. Our rates are discounted for non-profit organizations and first-time clients.

Think about the many ways we can serve you. We accept a wide variety of materials and formats:
Our Translation Services are composed of the following:

• General documents: Translations of Letters, Brochures, Handbooks, Invitations, Newsletters, Articles, emails, and faxes.

• Technical: Translation of Manuals, Guides, and Instructions.

• Marketing: Translation of Websites, Business Cards, Posters, Power Point Presentations, Labels, CD / DVD / Book Covers, and Other Types of Marketing Documents

At ** COMPANY NAME** you will have a fast, accurate and reliable Spanish translation services. Exceptional customer service and superior quality. Translations performed by our team of native speaker translators. Documents are edited and proofread at no extra charge. Competitive rates without compromising the quality of the translated documents and fast turnaround at no extra costs. Translation discounts for non-profit Organizations and first-time clients.

Please do not hesitate to contact us to discuss how we can together increase business in Spanish-speaking markets for your company. Sincerely,
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Dear AlpheccaStars,

Thank you so much for your prompt response and your very good ideas, they help me a lot. I just want to make a double check with you, I want to know what your are indicating with the workd that you highlighted in yellow?

Thank you again for your valuable help Emotion: smile
You are welcome! And also I forgot to welcome you to EnglishForums! We help people everywhere - we are all volunteers, so our help is free!

The yellow highlighting is for bad grammar that you should fix yourself. If you don't see the problem, just ask.
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