Dear all
I have to submit the application document for scholarship next week.
And I have to write a letter of motivation but my English is not so good.
Can anyone help me correct this letter please.
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you to apply for the .......(course name).............. in which I believe that can extend my theoretical knowledge for profession in field of designing website, which is a new kind of media that appeared to become more important to both business and education in my country.
I graduated in 2000 with a bachelor’s degree in architecture. During my years in architecture school, my interest turned from architectural design to the design that not only communicates but also interacts with the user. So I decided to conduct professional career as a web designer since graduated until now.
In developing country like Thailand, small and medium businesses which run by native investor are growing rapidly. Due to small asset, these businesses can not afford high price propaganda like TV commercial or magazine advertising. Nevertheless, they still need media that can exhaustively demonstrate their information with cheaper expense. Therefore website is an appropriate solution to choose. In addition, more advantages of website are prompt update, easy access and worldwide published.
Unfortunately, the benefits of website as a real media are still overlooked. Although website is well-known in Thailand, most of them were used only for providing small information. Plain concept, few creativeness and lack of design diminish the efficiency of communication which actually should be the most advantage of World Wide Web.
I hope that after accomplish the .......(course name).............. I will able emphasis my understanding about how good media can transfers original idea to the audience and how can I apply this knowledge to webpage designing. Besides ambitions for my future career, I also would like to be part of the movement to bring World Wide Web in to everybody’s life and draw the new direction of media communication for my country.
Studying in two countries, by the way, a terrific benefit of this course is not only important to boost chance of my future international career but also means to make me realize how to understand people in various environments. Traveling to different places, vision exchange between different cultures will absolutely develop my design and communication comprehension.
Thank you for kindly considering my application. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you require any further details or documents. I look forward to your positive response.
Yours faithfully
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