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Latest post Mon, Jun 22 2009 7:02 AM by Anonymous. 8 replies.
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Mon, 06 Jun 05 08:19 PM
I am writing a character letter to a judge who will be sentencing one of my friends. He was involved in a drunken driving accident. While out on bond he was going to consoling and AA. The main purpose of the letter is to get him into a minimum to medium security prison where he will be able to continue to get help. I am having a hard time starting it. Any help would be appreciated.
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Mister Micawber
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Tue, 07 Jun 05 01:55 AM
Just start with--
'To whom it may concern:
I am writing this letter in support of _____________...'
Go on to state the charges against your friend, and then make a statement of what you know about his redeeming qualities.
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Wed, 22 Jun 05 10:36 PM
I would advise getting the name of the judge, if possible. Address him as "Hon. John Smith"
Dear Judge Smith:
Instead of saying "you" or "your," state "your honor." It may sound pompous, but working in the legal field, I know judges are to be shown respect.
Also state how you appreciate his consideration of your request.
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Anonymous,
3 yr 357 days ago
I am trying to write a plea for my husbands motion to vacate to a judge. How much is to much info to put into the body of the letter?

Anonymous,
3 yr 51 days ago
- 9424 125 st.queens, new york 11419.dear ms.Bonaldes, I Mr. Shaan Vankenic is writing to inform you about my case. my problem started the day my mother call the cops to remove me from the home. my mother went to guyana on a holiday for two weeks leaving myself and two kids at her home I was staying there until I find a appartment for my wife and kids to move .i was going out with my daughter Teleasha when I send her to the kitchen to clean her shoes I was still in the bedroom on the phone I walk to the kitchen to find my daugther gone I started to look around the neigherhood could not find her I call my mother who came from guyana the night before and did not come to the house but stayed by her sister in queens for the night my mother said to me at the time Teleasha said you hit her I explain to my mother what happened my mother ashored me she know where my daughter was.I went on my way my cousin call about an hour after saying he took my mother and Teleasha to the house no my arrival at hte house my mother ask me for money to pay her rent I said to her your tenent said she paid the rent already she . I went to my bed and was awaken by the cops I told the cops what happen the told me to find an appartment .so I found a room the next day I could not take my whife and kids . On the 3th of september,2006 asking my mother to prepere Teleasha for school on the 5th of sept.she said to me she has a order of prection so on the 5th I went to the police the told me to go to the family court I found out it was true .So I fild for cousted for my chrildren I found an appartment were I can take care of my wife and kids . my mother do not know anything about my kids .she do not their school their docter can not help with home work hre home is one bedroom my daugher sleep on the floor I was on the floor outside in the living room My son sleeps on the bed with her she has a tenent who sleep there two days a week I mother got an evected notice for five months rent I give her money pay so she can PAY HER BACK RENT my mother control my entire life she do not like my wife and took my out of school at the age of 15 to work my older son live with with frinds he is 18 years my mother never send him to school he was living with her my mother works 7 days from 7am to 7pm My mother do not remember nothing not even her house keys she always thinking people wants to harm her my step was thrown out because she said he steal her clothes and spray her home with evil sprits I was told the same she said my wife works obea and will harm her my daughter is mentally retarded my mother tell her to lie
Anonymous,
3 yr 6 days ago
Guest wrote: | | I am writing a character letter to a judge who will be sentencing one of my friends. He was involved in a drunken driving accident. While out on bond he was going to consoling and AA. The main purpose of the letter is to get him into a minimum to medium security prison where he will be able to continue to get help. I am having a hard time starting it. Any help would be appreciated. |
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Anonymous,
1 yr 193 days ago
Use common letter form-
Honorable first & last name,
I am writing on behalf of __. I have known him for *** amount of years and have always known him to be of the utmost character and repuatation. blah blah blah
I beg the courts leniency when sentencing him because..........
Sign something like utmost respect, or sincerely,
Include your phone number.

Anonymous,
1 yr 180 days ago
Your Honor,
____ is my friend and has been for ____year, I can confirm that he is a good man. When making your decision, I beg you to consider his character and contributions to society.
(The next paragraph is just to give and I dea of the type of things you can write about. Only write the truth in your explanation)
When he was young he was always kind and eager to help others in need. As he was growing into a young man, any of his teachers could tell you of what a great person he was to have around. In High School, he never got in trouble and participated in many of the school programs and specially enjoyed and helped with the __program where __. He then went into college where he even worked many hours to help with tuition, room and board. After finishing college he immediately went to work for __and has been there ever since.)
__________ truly regrets being in this predicament and understands the cost of his actions. I only ask that you consider a lesser charge so he can in fact get the help he requires and together with our support continue to be an asset to his family and the general public.
Yours truly,
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Address
Telephone
Work#
Cell#
Good Luck,
Dee
Anonymous,
158 days ago
Write that you believe in him and support him in his recovery in a 12 step program.
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