letter writitng- request for change in designation

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Hi everybody

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Please help me. i want to write a letter to my boss for change of my designation. letter draft is as below please correct me.

To,

Mr. XYZ
Vice president
XYZ Corporation
mumbai

Dear Mr. XYZ

Sub:- Change of Designation.

I would like to sincerely thank you for promoting me to the position of Asst. Manager in XYZ corporation. This is an opportunity for advancement so i am very pleased to accept this offer.

Sir as you know that since last 3years i have been working for projects (Execution) and was not associated with Quantity Survey Work althoug i joined as a Quantity Surveyor. It is my request to change my designation from Asst. Manager Quantity Survey to Asst. Manager Civil.

I would like to again thank you and my seniors fot the expression of faith in my abilities that they have exhibited by this gesture and i assure you that i will definitely be an asset for the company

Respectfully Yours,

XYZ
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1 comment Mr. XYZ
Vice President
XYZ Corporation
Mumbai


Dear Mr. XYZ

Re: Change of Designation.

I would like to sincerely thank you for promoting me to the position of
Assistant ["Asst." isn't wrong as an abbreviation, but in my view it's better to write the word in full here] Manager in XYZ Corporation. This is an opportunity for advancement, and I am very pleased to accept this offer promotion.

Sir
As you know, that since last 3years I have for the past three years been working for projects (Execution) [If "projects/execution" is the name of a division/function of the company then this is OK, but it should be capitalised ("Projects"). If it isn't, then this doesn't read too well] and was not have not been associated with quantity surveying work [I think "surveying" would be the more usual word here, but ignore me if you know better] although I joined as a Quantity Surveyor. It is my request to change my designation from Assistant Manager, Quantity Surveying [again, ignore me if you know better] to Assistant Manager, Civil. [I'm not sure if this is correct or not. Should it be "Civil Engineering" or something? You would know, I guess.]

I would again like to again thank you and my other seniors for the expression of faith in my abilities that they you have exhibited by this gesture, and I assure you that I will definitely continue to be an asset to the company in my new role.

Respectfully Yours,
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Thank You Dear Mr. Wordy

I, am really sorry for late reply. The correction made by you in my letter draft really helped me a lot. Thanks again

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Re. Change of designation

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request for change my deisgnation labour to supervisor in my work permit contract
Dear Sir ,

Humble Please help me Sir ,
send Application latter to change my Designation From Labor to Asst.storekeeper

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Dear Sir ,

Hi Ever one my Friend ,

Please Humble request help me Sir ,

send Application latter to change my Designation From Labor to Asst.storekeeper

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