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Latest post Fri, Mar 6 2009 2:12 AM by Mister Micawber. 3 replies.
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Tuongvan  +  683463 Thu, 05 Mar 09 10:49 PM
Hi teachers,
Can I say these ?

Studying Marxism means learning  how to live kindly and loyally with the people. Living unkindly and disloyally can't be called Marxism.

 Studying Marxism means learning  how to live kindly as human beings.Living unkindly and disloyally can't be called Marxism.

Thank you in advance
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Mister Micawber  +  683522 Fri, 06 Mar 09 12:40 AM
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I don't think much of your adjective choices; they are not much used in mature writing.  I have suggested others:


Studying Marxism means learning how to live cooperatively with other people. Living uncooperatively can't be called Marxism.

Studying Marxism means learning how to live as social beings working or acting together willingly for a common purpose or benefit. Living antisocially can't be called Marxism.
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Tuongvan  +  683554 Fri, 06 Mar 09 01:50 AM
Thank you Mister Micawber, but I am afraid" l cooperatively " does not convey  exactly what my president Ho Chi Minh wanted to say.He said that a true communist must treat other people with kindness and deep affection.
Mister Micawber  +  683555 Fri, 06 Mar 09 02:12 AM
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An unrealistic approach; those are qualities that cannot be legislated.  That is why your sentences sound oddly immature.
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