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Qantic  #439858  Wed, 07 Nov 07 03:00 PM

Hi all,

I'm french and I want to work in England as soon as possible. I've finished my CV/Resume but I really don't know if it's good and I'm pretty sure there are a lot of mistakes. It would be nice if you can tell me my mistakes because I don't have friend or contact who are fluent in English.

Thanks

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WORK EXPERIENCE 

March 2007/September 2007: Technician at the "***" headquarters' hotline

            - Customer support/assistance on desktop and laptop PC (Hewlett Packard, Acer, Packard Bell, Fujitsu-Siemens, Compaq, Toshiba, Asus, Sony) and multifunction printers (HP, Brother, Cannon, Lexmark, Epson).

            - Helped to setup, configure and customize Microsoft Windows (98, XP, Vista), Internet (email, browser and network) and softwares for printers, burners and others peripherals.

            - Solved software and harware problems and triggered interventions when a component was declining

 

March 2007/October 2006: Support and maintenance technician in temporary works at "***"

            - Deployed and configured work stations (for AXA, Crédit agricole, HSBC, Neuf Cegetel)

            - Established a network for customer stations (for AXA, Neuf Cegetel, Adecco)

            - Supported IT parks (for AOL: restoration data user)

            - Audits of workstations (France Telecom: for a migration server)

                                                                                                                                

EDUCATION

2006:   - Baccalauréat STI Electrotechnique level equivalent to A Levels

2000:   - BEPC equivalent to GCSE'S under C grade (D-G)

FOREIGN LANGUAGES

 

French: Mother tongue

English: Intermediate level

Japanese: beginner level 

 

SPECIAL SKILLS

 

- Website creator: working knowledge of WebExpert 6, FlashMX, Adobe Illustrator CS3

- Movie maker: working knowledge of Fraps, VirtualDub, Adobe Premiere, Sony Vegas 6

- Fully IT literate (MS Windows 98, 2000, XP, Vista) including MS Office, Outlook, Lotus Notes Internet

- Can set up workstations and establish a network

- Customer support (by phone or face to face)

 

MISCELLANEOUS 

 

- Sport: Soccer, Kendo

- Hobbies: Cinema, travelling, reading, video games

 

REFERENCES

 

References available upon request

  
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Feebs11  #440680  Fri, 09 Nov 07 07:35 PM
 Qantic wrote:

Hi all,

I'm French and I want to work in England as soon as possible. I've finished my CV/Resume but I really don't know if it's good and I'm pretty sure there are a lot of mistakes. It would be nice if you can tell me my mistakes because I don't have friend or contact who are fluent in English.

Thanks

------------------------------------------------------

WORK EXPERIENCE 

March 2007/September 2007: Technician at the "***" headquarters' hotline

            - Customer support/assistance on desktop and laptop PCs (Hewlett Packard, Acer, Packard Bell, Fujitsu-Siemens, Compaq, Toshiba, Asus, Sony) and multifunction printers (HP, Brother, Canon, Lexmark, Epson).

            - Helped to setup, configure and customize Microsoft Windows (98, XP, Vista), Internet (email, browser and network) and softwares for printers, burners and other peripherals.

            - Solved software and hardware problems and triggered interventions when a component was declining failing.

 

March 2007/October 2006: Support and maintenance technician in temporary works at "***"

            - Deployed and configured work stations (for AXA, Crédit agricole, HSBC, Neuf Cegetel)

            - Established a network for customer stations (for AXA, Neuf Cegetel, Adecco)

            - Supported IT parks (for AOL: restoration data user)

            - Audits of workstations (France Telecom: for a migration server)

                                                                                                                                

EDUCATION

2006:   - Baccalauréat STI Electrotechnique level (equivalent to A Levels)

2000:   - BEPC (equivalent to GCSEs under C grade (D-G))

FOREIGN LANGUAGES

 

French: Mother tongue

English: Intermediate level

Japanese: Beginner level 

 

SPECIAL SKILLS

 

- Website creator: working knowledge of WebExpert 6, FlashMX, Adobe Illustrator CS3

- Movie maker: working knowledge of Fraps, VirtualDub, Adobe Premiere, Sony Vegas 6

- Fully IT literate (MS Windows 98, 2000, XP, Vista) including MS Office, Outlook, Lotus Notes Internet

- Can set up workstations and establish a network

- Customer support (by phone or face to face)

 

MISCELLANEOUS 

 

- Sport: Soccer, Kendo

- Hobbies: Cinema, travelling, reading, video games

 

REFERENCES

 

References available upon request




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