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Jobb

#60167 Wed, 08 Dec 04 12:55 PM

Can the sentence tug your heartstring? If not, polish it please:

1) If loving you is a sin, I'd commit it again and again.
2) If falling for you was a mistake, I'd rather have it repeated forever!

Jobb

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Mister Micawber

#60170 Wed, 08 Dec 04 01:12 PM

Can the sentences tug your heartstrings? -- Sure they can!

1) 'If loving you is a sin, I'd commit it again and again.' Great!

2) 'If falling for you was a mistake, I'd repeat it forever.' The shorter form is more effective.