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Latest post Mon, Feb 26 2007 2:16 AM by Anonymous. 5 replies.
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anita_a  +  324729 Mon, 05 Feb 07 05:43 PM

"I Love You"

His voice in my ears

echoed in my body,

flowing with the blood

blossomed into a fragrance

of everlasting love.
anita_a
Joined on Tue, Jul 27 2004
Sunny California
Regular Member 822
Cheers,Anita
Akki, 2 yr 274 days ago
I like it...just the line blossomed into a frangrance could be worked on a little!
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Pucca  +  326081 Thu, 08 Feb 07 11:43 AM
Heart [L]Heart [L]Smile [:)], I liked it aswell!Smile [:)]
Pucca
Joined on Sun, Aug 27 2006
Spain
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MorningDew, 2 yr 273 days ago
yes mee too.. nice poem anita_a Smile [:)]
anita_a, 2 yr 266 days ago
Thanks Akki, Pucca and Morning Dew forreading the poem and liking it too.
Anonymous, 2 yr 256 days ago
in thought to a kiss,which in beauty a woman in grace,a picture of happness in my mind eyes,why does she put warm my heart,just a summer blessing,it the thought of opening a flower just like rainbow,to my eyes,her smile put life in my heart just like kiss of beauty in thought,of warm to my soul,a melody in music,why does brightes in my life,because she is the lady in mylife,this is just a thought to you,regard byron in uk
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