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miharu_kuroda  #113101  Tue, 28 Jun 05 02:32 AM
unicorns and fairy wings
goblins gold and leprechaun things
dragons breath and banshee screams
zues thunderbolts and valhalla dreams
res chaiot and a sphinxs tail
and knights of old chain mail
father time and mother earth
thor laughing with mirth
mermaid songs and genies wishes
pandora box and cupids kisses
woodland nymphs and pixies tricks
wizards wand and witches wicks
hexes and spells
and the flaming depths of hell


  
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abbie1948  #114255  Fri, 01 Jul 05 11:56 AM
I rather like this, Miharu. A few apostrophes in the right place would help it, I think; e.g. "goblins' gold and leprechaun things"
  
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Hope that helps. Abbie
pieanne  #114391  Fri, 01 Jul 05 06:37 PM

Hello, Miharu,

Would you be a Harry Potter fan?
  
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I'm glad to help, but I'm not a native! And please excuse my typos...
Mister Micawber  #114508  Sat, 02 Jul 05 04:49 AM

And not a single verb in it.  It seems like a vague and pleasant list of imaginary things that happened to spring to mind.
  
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