CV for master course, pls check it

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Ohyeah  #434569  Thu, 25 Oct 07 08:21 AM
I'm writing a CV to apply for a Management master course in Europe. Could you please have a look at my CV and give me some suggestion?
Your support is highly appreciated.
Pls find below my CV:
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[Name]
Birthday: 26th, October 1983
Address: [.....] Ho Chi Minh city, Vietnam
Phone: (+84) (8) [....]
Mobile: (+84) (0) [....]
E-mail:  [....]@gmail.com
            [....]@yahoo.com


   1. Educational background:

    * July 2006: Graduated as a Mechatronics engineer and was one of the four highest thesis score students in class, 16/20, graded by Prof. DG, Professor of Automatic Control at INPG.

    * 2001: Entered the University of Technology with a high grade of 26.5 / 30.

    Joined PFIEV (Le Programme de Formation d’Ingénieurs d’Excellence au Vietnam) and majored in Mechatronics.

    * 1998-2001: Studied at LE HONG PHONG senior high school.

 

   2. Skills:

    * English: IELTS: 6.5.

    * French: DELF: A1, A2 and A3.

    * Computer knowledge:        
          o Programming: good at TC++, Matlab, VB.
          o Web: Adobe Flash, Adobe Dreameaver.
          o CAD & CAE:   good at AutoCAD, Mechanical Desktop, ProEngineer, MSC VisualNastran.
          o Office: advanced in Microsoft Access, Microsoft Excel and VBA in Office.
    * Communication (passed Staff communication training): Understand main types of people and proper ways to efficiently cooperate. Know how to communicate with external and internal customers.

    * Management (passed 2 management trainings):
          o 2 days by Officience General Director: share his management experience after several years working for Equant.
          o 3 days trained by DALETT (http://www.dalett.com).

   3. Working history:

    * Offy company: an outsourcing company for OBS - Orange Business Services:
          o       Sep 2006:
                + Started to work as a Data Analyst.
                + Responsibilty: analyze, process and feed data for Web[XYZ] back-end. Web[XYZ] is a website that provides automatically prices for network connection worldwide.
                + Optimization: using macros and programming to make it more productive, more time saving and accurate.  Reduce processing and reporting time from 2 days to half of a day.
          o       April 2007:
                + Appointed to be Project Manager for [ABC] team in Vietnam, the biggest team in the company at that time, after 6 months joining the company.
                + The main role of [ABC] is Supply chain management in network connectivity orders. The team is to ensure satisfying customers’ needs (services, lead time to connect), checking billing and providing optimal solutions to OBS.
                + The team is growing up in number, and now has 9 members.

    * Freelance job:
          o HM Biotechnologies, Inc in USA:
                + Starting end of 2006, work for HM Biotechnologies, Inc as a web designer.
                + Now: dedicated to customer relationship and having a staff for website maintenance.
          o Anh Sang Ltd, family company: specializes in alcohol cookers and tablets.
                + 2002: in charged of product research and development, designed first type of alcohol cooker.
                + 2006: play role of maintenance engineer as upgrade electronic circuits for welding machines and data management in develop an Access application to facilitate order management.

 
   4. Interests:

    * Traveling, drawing, designing.
    * Communicating in foreign languages.
    * Working in a global environment.
    * Having opportunities to improve myself.
    * Having great interest in nature.

  
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nona the brit  #436759  Tue, 30 Oct 07 11:37 AM

Your work history is a bit confusing.

You started at your current company in September 2006 and yet you started for HM Bio at the end of 2006?

List all your jobs clearly, starting with the most recent. I'd count the two roles at your current company as two separate jobs.

  
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