My friends,
Yesterday, I was asked to send my motivation letter not later than next Monday.
My situation is: I passed the entrance exam to MBA program in top 10 in Vietnam - my country & was sent as exchange student to its partner in France (only 3 scholarships are granted among 10 of us) . I chose Master in International Project Leadership.
Pls have a look at my letter & feel free to point out what is not good. Many thanks.
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PS: 1.Could you pls explain about the "funny
letter". Did I make it ?
2.Which clause mgiht be subsitituted "Dear Sir or Madam" ?
Dear Professors in Admission Board,
I am honored to be chosen as an exchange student, who has a chance to study at your university in the academic year 2006-2007. After getting 2 diplomas from University of Law and Economics University, I sought for improving my knowledge by joining the MBA program at the ... university. And now, with the opportunity from France, I hope to have another Master’s degree in International Project Leadership.
The main reason I chose this program is that in the market economy of Vietnam, there is a continually increasing need for projects, not only in business sector. I would like to intercept this trend. Currently I am designing a plan of a project which will last for 2 years and will cover the claim activities of all life insurance companies in Vietnam. With the foundation from this national project, I will spread a similar, but larger in scale, project over the Indochina. Since France has dual advantages: being a highly developed country in the Europe as well as being well-known in Asian region, it will be a good chance for me to obtain the occidental information at your university and apply it more effectively to our oriental environment.
Personally, as an extrovert and joyful man, I prefer community-like activities. Like to speak in front of a crowd, I actually have no problem driving the audience to the main points. Prefer quick decision rather than deeply thoughts, sometime good, but under other circumstances possibly bad, I still enjoy the venture and assume the responsibility from my fast responses. Obviously, this leads to a backward in my ability to predict long-term consequences. Even at that difficult time, I know the way to help my teammates to release by the gifted sense of humor. Is it not necessary? If not, you should forget me.
Of course, the knowledge is never a waste. Having been aware that how many fields a project will involve, I have equipped myself with basic knowledge in legal and financial field, all are important issues. Today, I need a guidance to carry out and I wait to receive it from you. It will be the mutual benefit, I can guarantee.
I hope that with the above arguments, you have enough information to reach the conclusion. However, if I fail this time, I will try to convince other universities until I receive the passport to the future.
Yours faithfully,
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