Ok Bird,
You want my honest opinion, right? It sounded stiff and unnatural for a wedding invitation. No offense. Now, I am sort of confused. Is the ceremony taken placed at a different location than the party?
Are the guests to meet the newly-wed at Portus? Or they leave for Portus with the newly-wed? What did you mean " You will be of great help to us if you reach a day before the marriage day?"
I am sort of confused. Is the ceremony taken placed at a different location than the party?
Are the guests to meet the newly-wed at Portus? Or they leave for Portus with the newly-wed? Your original post was not very clear? Can you clarify?
>>>>You will be glad to learn that the marriage of my brother will be held on the 15th of this month. The marriage party will leave for Portus (city name) at 10:00 a.m. on the same day.
I therefore invite you to join us on this happy day. You will be of great help to us if you reach a day before the marriage day. I hope you will accept my invitation and will come to join us.
With best wishes.