Mike lost a huge amount of money.

A burglar broke into Mike's house and as a result, Mike lost a huge amount of money.

Is it better to replace the bolded part with "Mike suffered a great loss of money? Thanks.

Mister Micawber wrote:

No, the second option is not as good.  The whole sentence, however, is poorly conceived.  A simple A burglar broke into Mike's house and stole a lot of money is much clearer and more natural.

Thanks, Mister.

Got it.

But could you revise the second option so that it may sound good? Thanks.

Mister Micawber wrote:

So that it sounds good?  Sure-- A burglar broke into Mike's house and stole a lot of money.

Thanks, Mister.

Then could I sum up that Mike suffered a great loss of money?