Are there any mistake in this short paragraph. Please Help! URGENT DUE WED.

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Anonymous  #341531  Wed, 21 Mar 07 04:11 AM
I will be using this at the end of my essay. Can you please tell me if I did my quoting correctly?
 
 

For the purpose of this question, I am ending my paper, by defining leadership as being (in the words of Colin Powell and Sam Walton) “Leadership is solving problems. The day soldiers stop bringing you their problems is the day you have stopped leading them. They have either lost confidence that you can help or concluded you do not care. Either case is a failure of leadership.” Colin Powell and “Outstanding leaders go out of their way to boost the self-esteem of their personnel. If people believe in themselves, it’s amazing what they can accomplish.” Sam Walton.

  
julielai  #341556  Wed, 21 Mar 07 05:32 AM
 Anonymous wrote:
I will be using this at the end of my essay. Can you please tell me if I did my quoting correctly?
 
 

For the purpose of this question, I am ending my paper, with a quote by so-and so: “Leadership is solving problems. The day soldiers stop bringing you their problems is the day you have stopped leading them. They have either lost confidence that you can help or concluded you do not care. Either case is a failure of leadership.” (One will suffice.) Then explain why this sums up what you're trying to say.

  
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