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Souky  +  205249 Sat, 11 Mar 06 06:51 PM
Hi,
Can someone check my motivation letter? Thank you in advance
Souky

Dear Sir or Madam,


With this letter I would like to express my interest in an internship at your company, .......


With the intention of working in a national or international financial institution or a related organization I have completed a Bachelor Es sciences at ...... combining three certificates (Marketing, Business Management, and Finance) and I am currently completing a Graduate Diploma in Finance and Treasury at the University ..... from which I will graduate in may 2006. With the theoretical knowledge I have acquired so far I would like to gain experience by putting my knowledge to practical use. Since I began studying finance, I have always found this field interesting and stimulating. The corporate and investment banking branch is of particular interest to me; indeed, to follow companies, institutions, even governments and to help them evolve and grow, is an aspect that I find particularly challenging. An internship within your Group would enable me to combine my professional interests with my afore mentioned intention of integrating a national or international financial institution.


Trough my living in Africa and graduating from a French school as well as the past years studying in Canada I have come to be fluent in English and French. For the same reasons I am entirely capable of integrating and working/studying in a multicultural environment such as your Group. Canadian Universities emphasis a lot on team work; therefore, I had numerous occasions to work on very different scholar projects with, each time, a different team. These experiences taught me to listen to people, to develop my leadership skill, and to take into consideration culture differences.


The Group ....., represents the perfect environment for a young motivated graduate that wishes to enter the banking sector. Your Group embraces values to which I can relate to and in which I can further enhance my skills. The emphasis on people seems to be a core concept within .......; in fact, clients, employees, and shareholders interests and their well-being are very important. The Group's international position represents an opportunity and an experience that I would like to be part of. Nowadays, businesses, institutions, and government have realized that operations take place in a global environment. I have lived in Africa for eighteen years, in Canada for six years, and know western Europe due to the fact that I am part French, getting to know Asia, one of the fastest growing markets, would allow me to further enhance my capability to understand and work in a global economy.



Thank you for your time and consideration and I hope my application will be successful. I am ready to answer any supplementary questions you might have.


Yours sincerely,


Souky




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Nick147  +  205629 Mon, 13 Mar 06 02:35 AM

Hi Souky, here is your letter tidied up a little. I hope this is helpful,

- Nick

Dear Sir or Madam,


I would like to express my interest in an internship at your company.

I am interested in working in a national or international financial institution or related organization I have completed a Bachelor Es sciences at ...... combining three certificates (Marketing, Business Management, and Finance) and I am currently completing a Graduate Diploma in Finance and Treasury at the University ..... from which I will graduate in May 2006. In addition to the theoretical knowledge I have acquired so far I would like to gain some practical experience. I have always found the field of finance interesting and stimulating, and corporate and investment banking is of particular interest to me. Helping companies, institutions, or even governments to evolve and grow is an aspect that I find particularly challenging. An internship with your Group would enable me to combine my professional work with my interest in helping to integrate a national or international financial institution.

Through living in Africa and graduating from a French school, followed by the recent years studying in Canada I have become fluent in English and French. For these reasons I am entirely capable of integrating and working/studying in a multicultural environment such as your Group. Canadian Universities strongly emphasise team work, and I have had numerous occasions to work on a range of projects with different teams. These experiences taught me to listen to people, to develop my leadership skills, and to take into consideration cultural differences.

The Group ....., represents the perfect environment for a young motivated graduate that wishes to enter the banking sector. Your Group also embraces values to which I can relate and in which I can further enhance my skills. The emphasis on people seems to be a core concept within .......; incorporating the interests and well-being of clients, employees, and shareholders. The Group's international position also represents an opportunity and an experience that I would like to be part of. Nowadays, businesses, institutions, and government have realized that operations take place in a global environment. I have lived in Africa for eighteen years, in Canada for six years, and I know western Europe due to the fact that I am part French. Getting to know Asia, one of the fastest growing markets, would allow me to further enhance my capability to understand and work in a global economy.

Thank you for your time and consideration and I hope my application will be successful. I am happy to answer any supplementary questions you might have.

Yours sincerely,

Souky

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Anonymous, 3 yr 241 days ago
Thank you very much Nick. I made the corrections and I'm more confident now; I can finally send my letter Smile [:)]
Thx again
Souky

Anonymous, 3 yr 142 days ago

hey Souky  !!Smile [:)]

This is Damien .... iam looking for a nice cover letter as well for applying for an internship ...do u have more ideas as to how i should go about ..or sites which might help me ...

Cheers!!

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