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Mizu  +  307363 Tue, 26 Dec 06 11:15 AM

Hello everyone,

I am really having a hard time writing a motivation letter, but then I found this forum. It's such a great help. I really appreciate the help you people provide. I hope that I can be helped whenever you have time...I will tell a bit about my history so that you know why i wrote the letter in the way it is now.

I was a high school student I graduated in 2004 (2000-2004) Degree: High School Diploma. After that duo some circumstances i stopped studying. Now I am 20 years old, If i start this study course I will be 21. In order to get admission at the university you need some other degrees as well but if you are 21+ you can still apply for it. Now this is really what i always wanted to study (Communication Management/ Business Management). I have been searching for a course that suits my but i couldn’t find anything until i saw this. The reason why i want to study in the Netherlands is because the Netherlands is a country of opportunities, it has the perfect fitting courses that I want and I have some family there (my only family left).

So i hope this looks a bit okay...

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to apply for the The Hague University of European Studies course at The Hague University.

I have completely read your whole website so that I feel interested from the teaching qualifications, suitable and perfect programs, priority fees, international degree and the international study environment.

I have always had difficulties picking an education or a job. I did not know my interests until I read about this education. It really caught my attention with the languages you must learn and know. I am very fluent in the English language and I am looking forward to learning Dutch and French, German or Spanish as well. I am already learning the Dutch language in order to be more prepared for my stay in The Netherlands. I am planning to work and build a future there in The Netherlands, and this opportunity will help me achieve that.

Besides of the facts I just mentioned the languages and the specialisation fields will help in my future job because HEBO offers best what others do not, quickly, easy, understandable and better for my education. I already know a few people that are following the HEBO course in The Hague University and I read all about the education.  HEBO can give me varieties of ideas, ways for my education to become better and the way I shall be living for the rest of my life time.

To choose the right University for my academic studies I already looked at some Universities in The Netherlands, ---- and the ---- University in Rotterdam. Those are both good Universities but none of them provide the facilitations I am looking for. I talked to Mrs. ---- who guided me in my academic planning. After having known about the course structure, specialisation fields and gaining enough information about the education trough people who are already doing the HEBO course and my own research I am sure that The Hague University would be the top University for me to continue my studies.

Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to your positive reply.

 

Sincerely Yours,

----
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New Member 03
Smark  +  307487 Tue, 26 Dec 06 08:22 PM
 Mizu wrote:

Hello everyone,

I am really having a hard time writing a motivation letter, but then I found this forum. It's such a great help. I really appreciate the help you people provide. I hope that I can be helped whenever you have time...I will tell a bit about my history so that you know why i wrote the letter in the way it is now.

I was a high school student I graduated in 2004 (2000-2004) Degree: High School Diploma. After that duo some circumstances i stopped studying. Now I am 20 years old, If i start this study course I will be 21. In order to get admission at the university you need some other degrees as well but if you are 21+ you can still apply for it. Now this is really what i always wanted to study (Communication Management/ Business Management). I have been searching for a course that suits my but i couldn’t find anything until i saw this. The reason why i want to study in the Netherlands is because the Netherlands is a country of opportunities, it has the perfect fitting courses that I want and I have some family there (my only family left).

So i hope this looks a bit okay...

---------------------------------

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to apply for the The Hague University of European Studies course at The Hague University.

I have completely read your whole website so that I feel interested from the teaching qualifications, suitable and perfect programs, priority fees, international degree and the international study environment.

I have always had difficulties picking an education or a job. I did not know my interests until I read about this education. It really caught my attention with the languages you must learn and know. I am very fluent in the English language and I am looking forward to learning Dutch and French, German or Spanish as well. I am already learning the Dutch language in order to be more prepared for my stay in The Netherlands. I am planning to work and build a future there in The Netherlands, and this opportunity will help me achieve that.

Besides of the facts I just mentioned the languages and the specialisation fields will help in my future job because HEBO offers best what others do not, quickly, easy, understandable and better for my education. I already know a few people that are following the HEBO course in The Hague University and I read all about the education.  HEBO can give me varieties of ideas, ways for my education to become better and the way I shall be living for the rest of my life time.

To choose the right University for my academic studies I already looked at some Universities in The Netherlands, ---- and the ---- University in Rotterdam. Those are both good Universities but none of them provide the facilitations I am looking for. I talked to Mrs. ---- who guided me in my academic planning. After having known about the course structure, specialisation fields and gaining enough information about the education trough people who are already doing the HEBO course and my own research I am sure that The Hague University would be the top University for me to continue my studies.

Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to your positive reply.

 

Sincerely Yours,

----
Joined on Sat, Dec 23 2006
New Member 01
IMTB  +  307504 Tue, 26 Dec 06 09:24 PM
u godda put in some facts like graduated in 2004 (2000-2004) Degree: High School Diploma or any othe relevant experiences......they need to know WHY you are siutable for their program....
Joined on Sun, Dec 24 2006
Germany
New Member 27
Mizu  +  308680 Sat, 30 Dec 06 09:23 AM
Okay i added some stuff:

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to apply for The Hague University of European Studies course at The Hague University.

I graduated class of 2005 (2000-2004) Degree: High School Diploma. Although my transcript shows otherwise, I was very good in many subjects including: English, History, and Art. I am very skilful at studying languages; I speak English and Vietnamese fluently, as well as a fair amount of Japanese. I was part of school clubs such as Excel, which taught us leadership and to help with the community. I have previous experiences performing presentations through out my high school years. I also had an Economics class during my last years, which discussed about markets and the economy in the United States.

I have completely read your entire website and I am interested from the teaching qualifications, suitable and perfect programs, international degree and the international study environment.

I have always had difficulties picking an education or a job. I did not know my interests until I read about this education. It really caught my attention with the languages you must learn.  I am looking forward to learning Dutch and French, German, or Spanish as well. I have already taken the liberty of teaching myself Dutch in advance in order to be more prepared for my stay in The Netherlands. I am planning to work and build a future there in the Netherlands, and this opportunity will help me achieve that.

Aside from the other facts I mentioned, the languages and specialization fields will help my future job because HEBO offers the best of what others do not, quickly, easily for my education. I already know a few people that are following the HEBO course in The Hague University and I read all about the education. HEBO can give me a variety of ideas, ways for my education to become better, and the way I shall be living for the rest of my life time.

To choose the right University for my academic studies, I have already looked into a few Universities in the The Netherlands: --- and the --- University in Rotterdam. They are both god Universities but none of them provide the facilitations I am looking for. I have spoken Mrs. Carole Meders, who guided me in my academic planning. After having known about the course structure, special fields, and gaining course of my own research, I am positive that The Hague University would be the top University for me to continue my studies.

Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to your positive reply.

Sincerely,

---
Mizu  +  308994 Sun, 31 Dec 06 03:00 AM
should I add that im writing for the course that starts at the end of august? Since there is one in february as well..and euhm that I will be 21 by then (So i dont need all the stuff that a person needs who is below 21) ??
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