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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply for The Hague University of
European Studies course at The Hague University.
I graduated class of 2005 (2000-2004) Degree: High
School Diploma. Although my transcript shows otherwise, I was very good in many
subjects including: English, History, and Art. I am very skilful at studying
languages; I speak English and Vietnamese fluently, as well as a fair amount of
Japanese. I was part of school clubs such as Excel, which taught us leadership
and to help with the community. I have previous experiences performing
presentations through out my high school years. I also had an Economics class
during my last years, which discussed about markets and the economy in the United States.
I have completely read your entire website and I am
interested from the teaching qualifications, suitable and perfect programs,
international degree and the international study environment.
I have always had difficulties picking an education or
a job. I did not know my interests until I read about this education. It really
caught my attention with the languages you must learn. I am looking forward to learning Dutch and
French, German, or Spanish as well. I have already taken the liberty of
teaching myself Dutch in advance in order to be more prepared for my stay in
The Netherlands. I am planning to work and build a future there in the Netherlands, and this opportunity will help me achieve that.
Aside from the other facts I mentioned, the languages
and specialization fields will help my future job because HEBO offers the best
of what others do not, quickly, easily for my education. I already know a few
people that are following the HEBO course in The Hague University and I read all about the education. HEBO can give me
a variety of ideas, ways for my education to become better, and the way I shall
be living for the rest of my life time.
To choose the right University for my academic
studies, I have already looked into a few Universities in the The Netherlands: --- and the --- University in Rotterdam. They are both god Universities but none of them provide the facilitations
I am looking for. I have spoken Mrs. Carole Meders, who guided me in my
academic planning. After having known about the course structure, special
fields, and gaining course of my own research, I am positive that The Hague
University would be the top University for me to continue my studies.
Thank you for considering my application and I am
looking forward to your positive reply.
Sincerely,
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