Hi there! Could you be so kind to check my motivation letter. I will be really glad to see any comments. I also hope my letter will bring to someone an idea what to write in his letter of motivation. Thanks a lot
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you because I have a strong desire to study in *** Program. My dream is to be a high qualified manager. I want to be a specialist who has thorough understanding of how the manufacturing and business processes are organized and who is able to use control mechanisms and a high-level strategic underpinning in project management.
While studying in *** I have made great strides. I can even say that I have become one of the best students of the university. I have been always maintaining an excellent grade average. I have achieved several academic honors. After I finished the first academic year I was the only student on faculty who was transferred to the free course, i.e. since that moment the government started to cover my education expenses. Moreover, I was awarded to several scholarships as a student with excellent academic progress.
In order to be a high achiever and to be able to solve the problems which nobody could solve before I have to use such good qualities as extreme industry and purposefulness, high level of Emotional Intelligence and self-motivation. The work in student public organization brought me an experience of how to communicate with people and how to get together quickly a group of fellows and motivate them to work hard in order to fulfil a project in a fixed hour. While sports activities have always charged me with positive energy and strengthened my willpower.
In the end I should notice that it is really important for me to receive *** scholarship because my financial condition can not afford me to pursue any abroad study programs.
Obtaining a quality of *** from your university will not only strengthen my knowledge but will also help me to fulfil my dream to become a world level top manager. I thank you for the time you spend reading this letter. I am looking forward to a positive response.
Yours sincerely,
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