Hey guys thanks in advance!
pls check the grammar and the overall appropriateness?
what do u think is it a good cover letter or needs tuning?
Dear Sir / Madam,
I would like to apply for ...
My motivation for applying this programme is because of the
unmatched value X places upon it’s people and the excellent self development
opportunities X provides. I was immediately convinced, when I read the X
careers web page that starting a career at X is the chance of a lifetime to
fulfill my objective of developing myself as a prospective business leader.
I have studied Economics at X University in X.
The university itself is the best internationally renowned university
in X Only those students in the top five hundred where there are one
million and a half applicants taking the university entrance
exams are admitted to the university. Admission to such a university
where
students are highly competent equipped me with a constant awareness to
be
disciplined and an enthusiasm for change in order to ( necessary?) be
ahead of others.
In terms of interpersonal communication, I am responsive to my colleagues and am eager to
help whenever possible. I am good at team work, able to consider and analyse
different opinions, and take the lead when necessary. I am good at persuading
others by creating relationships based on mutual trust and understanding.
I had an internship with Banca X. There I had the
chance to serve as a marketing analyst for one and a half month during my 3
months internship period which was decisive in choosing my career path. Besides
work experience I participated in a great range of social activities and held
roles as supervisor, executive board member and president. During those
activities I sometimes lead teams and sometimes was part of a team. Taking part
in extra-curricular activities provided me with invaluable organizational,
public communication and leadership skills.
I know X seeks only the brightest and most creative applicants for the
graduate development programme. I also know that I have the ability it takes to
perform the job effectively, and that I am excited about the idea of working
for a dynamic, internationally recognised IT company,
You can find my qualifications and skills in the enclosed resume. If you
would like to have more information about my qualifications and skills, please
contact me by e-mail or phone.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,