Please help me with the motivation letter..specially in the forth paragraph..Any modifications and suggestions will be accepted..This letter answers the following question: "
Please write a clear and detailed description of your academic objectives and the reasons why you wish to pursue them. Discuss your goals both in terms of your field of study in general and within your specific area of specialization. Describe the type of program you wish to pursue and how it relates to your academic and professional background and your objectives for the future. Please keep in mind that the essay will be an essential part of your application for placement into an appropriate program. In your essay do not name specific universities at which you would like to study "
My essay:
Since childhood, I have had a very strong desire for learning everything new. This became a habit of life for me and affected my point of view a lot towards learning as not being just a routine. This habit encouraged me to continually upgrade my academic capabilities. In this regard, getting the master degree is nothing more than one step on my future plan of self-development.
When I was at secondary school, it was the first time I had learned about computers. So, I was very interested in learning so much about computers. My fondness of this science motivated me to join the department of computer and electrical engineering at IUG university fulfill my desire. But during my study, some subjects like internet technology and computer networks attracted my interest. My graduation project was simulations of some cases of computer networks using OPNET. Furthermore, after the completion of my study at the university, I enrolled in Governmental Computer Center and gained CCNA. This step kindled my interest to pursue my education and acquire a deeper theoretical and practical knowledge in a major of computer networks.
"Computer Networks" field is not a random choice. It is a result of profound and long thinking about which field would be the most convenient to my interests, my background, and local society needs. As a developing country, Palestine is in an urgent need for the specialists in many majors and specially IT field to lead the building process. Therefore, getting a master in this field will give me the opportunity to lead several scientific researches that will hopefully contribute to this area of technology.
United States of America is an excellent environment to pursue my education, not only because it is an English speaking country but also one of the most leading countries in IT field in the world. So, I will be close to new discoveries and achievements in my area of specialization and able to learn all I can from abundant scientific resources. On the other hand, getting a master from a multicultural country will boost my cultural experience. As a representative of Palestine, I gained a great experience through my participation in "Reach Out" project which was a regional cultural project organized by British council. It granted me the opportunity to interact with people from different cultures and made me thirsty to know about other cultures.
Finally, I have a strong faith that getting master in this major will be a great benefit for me as it will definitely help in raising my academic background and enhancing my characteristic. It will also be advantageous for the local technological society as it will form an addition to the modern sciences that started to find its way here.