Motivation letter...please check!

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Anonymous  #187965  Tue, 24 Jan 06 01:32 PM

Could you please check my motivation letter for grammatic errors and style if possible? Thanks a lot! Any suggestions will be appreciated! Here it comes:

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Dear Sir or Madam,

 

I am aiming at an international career in a multinational company, and I would be grateful for the opportunity to partecipate in the Top Flight Entry programme offered at ***. My areas of interest are Customer service and Marketing and Sales.

 

I graduated in International Relations and Diplomacy in July 2004 from the University of ***. My four-year degree involved several courses in international economics and law issues. During my studies in the ***  I got increasingly interested in economics and business and took several courses in international management and trade. I am currently pursuing a Masters degree in International Relations at ***, Spain. My research topic is „A comparative analysis of models of economic development in the EU”.

 

I got the opportunity to have a greater insight in international sales while working as assistant of the import/export department at ***. I learnt to communicate effectively with clients and developed my ability to work independently. In addition, I have experience in customer service at ***.

 

Top Flight Programme is the best choice for me, because of my deep interest in the European high tech industry. I believe that  maintaining Europe’s competitive position requires continuous innovation and *** is the best example of it. I am also very curious to work in an international environment since I am ambitious to learn more everyday.

 

I hope my qualifications would enable me to work for you since I am confident that I could make an exciting contribution to your company.

 



 Yours sincerely,

 

  
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