Hi!
Could somebody help me with my motivation letter (gramatics, spelling and content)? I want to apply for a Crepuq scholarship in order to study the next year in Montreal in a english university.
I appreciate a lot any help. Thanks you.
This is the present version of the letter:
Dear Sir or Madam,
With
this letter, I would like to submit my application for the Crepuq Scholarship
Program for studying in an University from Quebec during the academic year 2007-2008.
I would
like to continue my education at an institution of higher education from Canada, in
order to learn more about the structure and organization of a company,
economical processes in general, global economic coherences and communications,
new cultures thought a North-American perspective, but also to improve my English economic vocabulary.
I have always endeavoured to
do my best and learn as much as possible. I have started my universitary classes in Romania where I
have successfully obtained high marks in most of the courses with an overall of
9.40 over 10 in the first two years. In addition to this, I won the First prize
on the Economic Student’s Research Session in April 2005, section: Financial
Management of the Firm.
I have continued my education in the
University of Social Sciences in Toulouse, where I have obtained a BA Degree in Economics, specialisation in International
Economics, Money and Finance (with honours).Even if
I have already began my master degree in France, I think that the
chance of studying in your University is a unique opportunity to increase my
knowledge and to live a very enriching experience.
In addition to my academic activities, I have also had
the chance to take part in many social volunteer activities which gave me
experience in working with young people from all over the world.
Thereafter
I want to use the acquired knowledge to continue in a masters program of
finance, aiming to be well prepared to enter the business world. My long-term
goal is to work for an international company in the financial field,
bringing in new ideas and an efficient working style gained through my higher
education gained in Romania,
in France and hopefully in Canada.
I am confident that with my strong motivation,
my personality and with an academic experience in an international
and multicultural environment, I
will have a solid foundation for a successful and fulfilling career, in which I
plan to weld relationships across cultures and ensure that intercultural
communication takes place effectively.
I have attached
all required documents for the Crepuq program.
Thank you for taking the time to consider my application. Please
do not hesitate to contact me if you require any further details.
Yours respectfully,
A