Motivation Letter for Master's Program

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Hello,

could somebody have a look at my motivation letter? I am mostly afraid of some gramatical mistakes since it is not my mother language but all comments will be appreaciated. Is it too short in your opinion?

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to apply for the Master’s Program in Software Engineering and Computer Systems.

I graduated in Computer Science at the Polish-Japanese Institute of Information Technology, Faculty of Computer Science in and have received a Bachelor in Science degree.
My specialty is databases and applications but my main focus of interest is software engineering and database information systems.

Ever since I started my undergraduate program in , I decided to pursue further academic education in Software Engineering or Computer Systems. I think that especially Software Engineering is very interesting subject because of the complicity of the whole process of projecting and implementing software and a very important role of the information systems in our life. I have chosen this field as it is dynamically developing technology and promises a fulfillment of professional goals that I set for myself.

I decided to apply for the Master’s Program in as the culture and lifestyle of this country appeals to me strongly. Not to mention the high education level and demanding programs as well as great job opportunities and professional approach to modern technologies.

I think that the chosen program will help me to gain both knowledge and experience to start
a professional carrier in Information Technology as well as promise a fulfillment of my interests.

With a solid foundation in academic theory and practical knowledge gained during two internship and part-time job where I have been employed during my Bachelor’s Program I believe
I am qualified to start a Master’s Program in the chosen field of interest.

After I complete my Master program and receive Master degree I would like to start PhD studies, preferably in , in the same field to pursue further research.

Thank you very much for considering my request. I look forward to your positive response.

Yours truthfully,

Natalia.

Thank you very much.
Regards,
N.
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Anonymous:
Hi,

I do not have time to check your Full motivation, but i am agree with you.
Anonymous:
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to apply for the Master’s Program in Software Engineering and Computer Systems.

I graduated in Computer Science at the Polish-Japanese Institute of Information Technology, Faculty of Computer Science in Bytom, Poland and have received a Bachelor in Science degree. My specialty is databases and applications but my main focus of interest is software engineering and database information systems.

Ever since I started my undergraduate program in Poland, I have wanted to pursue further academic education in Software Engineering or Computer Systems. I think that Software Engineering is especailly interesting because of the complicity of the whole process of projecting and implementing software, which is a very important role for information systems in our lives. I have chosen this field as it is dynamically developing more technology and promises to fulfill the professional goals that I have set for myself.

I decided to apply for the Master’s Program in Sweden as the culture and lifestyle of this country appeal to me strongly. I am impressed with the high education level and demanding programs, as well as great job opportunities and professional approach to modern technologies.

I think that the chosen program will help me gain both the knowledge and the experience to start a professional career ? in Information Technology, as well as fulfill my interests.

With a solid foundation in academic theory and practical knowledge gained during two internships and a part-time job, where I have been employed during my Bachelor’s Program, I believe I am qualified to start a Master’s Program in this chosen field of interest.

After I complete the Master program, I would like to start PhD studies - preferably in Sweden - to pursue further research in the same field.

Thank you very much for considering my request. I look forward to your positive response.

Yours truthfully,

Natalia.
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