Motivation letter for a training

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Within the framework of my formation, I must carry out a training course in laboratory, also I must do a motivation letter.
Is it good ?

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Phone home: (33) ***

25 November 2004

Dr Kim Hammond-Kosack
Rothamsted Research
Plant-Pathogen Interaction Division
Harpenden
Hertfordshire AL5 2QJ

Reference : your advertisement in Life Sciences World

Dear Mr Hammond-Kosach,

Your advertisement in “Life Sciences World” has caught my attention. Within the framework of my formation, I must carry out a training course in laboratory, also integer your team would be for me a real chance to conclude my draft studies and to have new experiences

As requested in your advertisement, I have a good knowledge of bioinformatic and fungal, plant and animal biology, in fact at the time of my formation I followed courses of informatic, biology and I learned how to use tools of bioinformatic. Moreover, my last experiments learned to me with working well in team.

You may contact me by phone at (33)***, or by post at my home address. I’d like the opportunity to demonstrate that I have the necessary qualities.

Sincerely Yours,

Nol Ct-Sr,

Encl.: Personal resume.
New Member06
Hello Belldandy

Perhaps:

_____________________

Dear Dr Hammond-Kosack,

Re: Your advertisement in Life Sciences World

I am very interested in your advertisement for the post of [add here] in Life Sciences World.

As part of my training, I am required to carry out a training course in a laboratory. To work as part of your team would greatly assist me in completing my studies. It would also provide me with invaluable experience.

As stipulated in your advertisement, I have a good knowledge of bioinformatics and fungal, plant and animal biology. During my training I took courses in informatics and biology. I also learned how to use the tools of bioinformatics. My recent experience has taught me to work well as part of a team.

You may contact me by phone at (33)***, or by post at my home address. I would very much appreciate the chance of demonstrating that I possess the qualities you require.

Yours sincerely
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Thank you very much MrPedantic.
I thought of having made more faults than that, that reassures me. They is sympathetic to correct the others, especially for those as me which do not have a good English level.
Thank you.
Nol.
Hello again BellDandy

It was my pleasure. I hope you get the job.

I wasn't sure what 'informatics' meant, in the 3rd paragraph, so left it as it is. Did
you perhaps mean 'information technology'?

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Hello MrPedantic,

I think that it is "informactics" considering I learned the programming, the algorithms...

thank you (it is not a job but a training)

Nol.
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