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Latest post Thu, Nov 11 2004 2:37 PM by belldandy29. 6 replies.
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belldandy29  +  54754 Thu, 11 Nov 04 02:37 PM
Within the framework of my formation, I must carry out a training course in laboratory, also I must do a motivation letter.
Is it good ?


Ct-Scr Nol
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E-mail: aaa@aaa.fr
Phone home: (33) xxxxxx


25 November 2004

Dr Kim Hammond-Kosack
Rothamsted Research
Plant-Pathogen Interaction Division
Harpenden
Hertfordshire AL5 2QJ


Reference : your advertisement in Life Sciences World


Dear Mr Hammond-Kosach,


Your advertisement in “Life Sciences World” has caught my attention. Within the framework of my formation, I must carry out a training course in laboratory, also integer your team would be for me a real chance to conclude my draft studies and to have new experiences


As requested in your advertisement, I have a good knowledge of bioinformatic and fungal, plant and animal biology, in fact at the time of my formation I followed courses of informatic, biology and I learned how to use tools of bioinformatic. Moreover, my last experiments learned to me with working well in team.


You may contact me by phone at (33)xxxxxxx, or by post at my home address. I’d like the opportunity to demonstrate that I have the necessary qualities.


Sincerely Yours,


Nol Ct-Sr,

Encl.: Personal resume.

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MrPedantic  +  54761 Thu, 11 Nov 04 02:53 PM
Hello Belldandy

Perhaps:

_______________________

Dear Dr Hammond-Kosack,

Re: Your advertisement in Life Sciences World

I am very interested in your advertisement for the post of [add here] in Life Sciences World.

As part of my training, I am required to carry out a training course in a laboratory. To work as part of your team would greatly assist me in completing my studies. It would also provide me with invaluable experience.

As stipulated in your advertisement, I have a good knowledge of bioinformatics and fungal, plant and animal biology. During my training I took courses in informatics and biology. I also learned how to use the tools of bioinformatics. My recent experience has taught me to work well as part of a team.

You may contact me by phone at (33)xxxxxxx, or by post at my home address. I would very much appreciate the chance of demonstrating that I possess the qualities you require.

Yours sincerely
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belldandy29  +  54780 Thu, 11 Nov 04 05:05 PM
Thank you very much MrPedantic.
I thought of having made more faults than that, that reassures me. They is sympathetic to correct the others, especially for those as me which do not have a good English level.
Thank you.
Nol.
MrPedantic  +  54837 Thu, 11 Nov 04 11:24 PM
Hello again BellDandy

It was my pleasure. I hope you get the job.

I wasn't sure what 'informatics' meant, in the 3rd paragraph, so left it as it is. Did
you perhaps mean 'information technology'?

MrP
belldandy29  +  54912 Fri, 12 Nov 04 11:29 AM
Hello MrPedantic,

I think that it is "informactics" considering I learned the programming, the algorithms...

thank you (it is not a job but a training)

Nol.
Guest, 4 yr 351 days ago
I am interested in studying an HIV/AIDS Counselling course. My employer has asked me write a motivation letter so they could pay for it.
nona the brit  +  59982 Tue, 07 Dec 04 10:46 PM
Guest, please read the top two posts in this section.
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