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Latest post Sat, May 3 2008 5:10 AM by sonnig. 2 replies.
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sonnig
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Sun, 27 Apr 08 02:15 AM
hallo, i am applying university in germany. can some one please help me to correct my mistake. please. I am afraid that my motivation letter is not good enough or i do not know what am i writting some times.
Thanks .  Dear Madam or Sir:
I am writing to you to apply for the XX for XXX XX XXX at XX. I finished my A level back in year 2007 and majored in the required subjects of Physics and Mathematics.
I could say that, becoming an engineer and to have the chance to study abroad have always been the most idealistic ambition in my life, since I was young.
Why Electrical Engineering? As we know, the formation of modern world nowadays is not build in a single day. This is due to the gradually develop in science and technology. In order to achieve such an advanced level in those modern fields, after all, the study and application of electrical play the most important role in each and every aspect. Take, for example, the occurrence of major blackouts in all over the world. During the blackout, most of the systems in transportation, government institution, commercial organization, public facility, computer, networking and so on are affected. As a result, the situation in the society, institution and business line are in a state of chaos. Apparently, this show that how dependant human being is on electricity.
However, I came to realize that my knowledge is still limited in many areas and yet I have the strong interest in electrical field. As a member of new generation, I wish I could make significant contribution to the future by improving my knowledge and understanding of Electrical Engineering in not only the theory but also the method as well as the practical and this, nevertheless, is one of my aims in completing my education with studying in Electrical Engineering.
Personally, I am willingly to accept criticisms and new ideas from others and can be easily work as a team by carrying out the principle of my life which is tolerance, hard-working, flexible and organized. In addition, I would love the experience of meeting people from all around the world, learning other cultures and new languages.
With my academic background and relevant studying field, I am confidence that I am qualify and able to perform well in this programme. I would be grateful if you could give my application yours most favourable consideration. I look forward to your positive response.
Yours faithfully,
XXX XX XX
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Thu, 01 May 08 09:30 AM
Dear Madam or Sir:
I am writing pply for the *** for *** *** *** at ***. I finished my A level 2007 and majored in the required subjects of Physics and Mathematics.
Having the chance of studying abroad and becoming an engineer have always been the most idealistic ambition in my life since young.
Why I pick Electrical Engineering? This is due to the fact that modern world nowadays is very dependent on such field of expertise in keeping in order any place concerned after the occurrence of major electricity blackouts affecting the systems in transportations, government institutions, commercial organizations, public facilities, computers, networks and so on resulting in a state of chaos.
However, I have come to realize that my knowledge is still limited in many areas though I have the strong interest in electrical field. As a member of new generation, I wish I could make significant contributions to the future in my chosen field of study.
Personally, I am willingly to accept criticisms and new ideas from others and can easily work as a team, bearing in mind always to be tolerant, hard-working, flexible and organized. In addition, I would love the experience of meeting people from all around the world, learning other cultures and new languages.
With my academic background in the relevant field, I am confident that I am qualified and able to perform well in this programme. I would be grateful if you could give my application your most favourable consideration. I look forward to your positive response.
Thank you.
Yours faithfully,
*** *** ***
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sonnig,
1 yr 208 days ago
thank you .
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