motivation letter for university (souki)

With this letter I would like to explain my motivation for studying Business Administration in general and why I chose AL AKHAWAYN UNIVERSITY. (no need to put their name all in capitals). 

 Throughout my secondary education, I have been most interested in programs taught in English.

As you can see from the  document I  already sent you, I got my Baccalaureate in Experimental Science from Elmanal School in June 2005.

After that, I enrolled at Sunderland University, which is a British university here in Casablanca, that offers its programs in English . I am taking a foundation year program. During this year, I have learned some new subjects related to business such as business English and English for commerce . I have also learned some basic skills in IT. Due to the personal development course I acquired a lot of new ideas in different areas. I worked really hard to get a good grade.

After completing this, I would like to continue my education at an institution of higher education, to obtain a Bachelor of Business Administration. In particular, I am interested in learning more about the structure and organization of a company, economical processes in general, global economic coherences and communications, new cultures and languages. I also want do develop my methodical abilities and soft skills.

Thereafter I want to use the acquired knowledge to continue in a masters program of business, aiming to be well prepared to enter the business world. My long-term goal is to work for an international company or to start as an independent entrepreneur, bringing in new ideas and an efficient working style gained through my higher education hopefully started at AUI. It might be a good idea to mention the areas of business that particularly interest you - what type of industry do you want to work in?

Due to the reputation of AUI , I believe that your offered business administration program is greatly suitable for me, combining my passion for global communication, social justice, political freedom and my love for organizing and leading projects.

And I can’t talk about AUI without thinking of its students of course and their good level after graduating from AUI and their career. re-phrase this sentence.

I am confident that with my strong motivation, my personality and with the Business Administration program on top, I will have a solid foundation for a successful and fulfilling career, in which I plan to weld relationships across cultures and ensure that intercultural communication takes place effectively.

I have already sent all required documents for the undergraduate program. Thank you for taking the time to consider my application. I look forward to a positive response and to a great time in an outstanding educational program at AUI.


Yours respectfully

Hi,

I wasn't sure about this part from your first letter but it should read

"I took a foundation year program. During the year, I  learned some new subjects related to business such as business English and English for commerce. I also learned some basic skills in IT. Due to the personal development course I acquired a lot of new ideas in different areas. I worked really hard to get a good grade.

Now I have completed this, I would like to continue my education at"

Good luck with your application.

With this letter I would like to explain my motivation for studying Business Administration in general and why I chose Al Akhawayn University:

Throughout my secondary education, I have been most interested in programs taught in English.

As you can see from the documents I already sent you, I got my Baccalaureate in Experimental Science from Elmanal School in June 2005.

After that, I enrolled at Sunderland University, which is a British university, here in Casablanca,

 that offers its programs in English.

I took a foundation year program. During the year, I learned some new subjects related to business such as business English and English for commerce. I also learned some basic skills in IT. Due to the personal development course I acquired a lot of new ideas in different areas.

Now I have completed this, I would like to continue my education at an institution of higher education, to obtain a Bachelor of Business Administration. In particular, I am interested in learning more about the structure and organization of a company, economical processes in general, global economic coherences and communications, new cultures and languages. I also want do develop my methodical abilities and soft skills.

Thereafter I want to use the acquired knowledge to continue in a masters program of business, aiming to be well prepared to enter the business world. My long-term goal is to work for an international company or to start as an independent entrepreneur, bringing in new ideas and an efficient working style gained through my higher education hopefully started at AUI.

Due to the reputation of AUI, I believe that your offered Business Administration program is greatly suitable for me, combining my passion for global communication, social justice, political freedom and my love for organizing and leading projects.

I am confident that with my strong motivation, my personality and with the Business Administration program on top, I will have a solid foundation for a successful and fulfilling career, in which I plan to weld relationships across cultures and ensure that intercultural communication takes place effectively.

I have already sent all required documents for the undergraduate program. Thank you for taking the time to consider my application. I look forward to a positive response and to a great time in an outstanding educational program at AUI.


Yours respectfully