You have too much waffle - information that isn't really relevant, so I've cut a few parts down. Some of the information you give creates quite a negative impression - for example the fact that you were indecisive about what to study. Only tell them the positive stuff! If you are sending all parts of your application it is going to be far too long.I've made some corrections for you and also highlighted areas that you need to re-write. Nona the Brit (can't log-in at the moment).
I have dreamt about studying abroad for a long time and I’m determined to continue studying at a post-graduate level. I graduated with a BA degree in Accountancy, Analysis and Audit from ****State University in June 2002. I obtained high marks in most of the courses. I now wish to further develop my career in accountancy and financial management of the construction industry.
I gained experience of the laws and regulations regarding taxation during my work on tax inspections. I’m experienced in keeping the all segments of accounting and financial operations according with Russian legal system in favor for my occupation on the site-constructions. I comprehended the structure, characteristics of costs in construction from the earth works to roof and asphalt works. I had a view of the effective methods to organize cash and documents flows under tough pressure of time schedule.
Russia is a country with a short history of liberal economic principals. The construction market is a part of the economy that is developing rapidly. As for rules in legislation, taxation and accountancy aspects they haven’t been fully established yet. I face each day difficulties to refer expenses with their real nature, Russian legislation and foreign demands. Participatory dwelling construction and mortgage loan activity are issues have appeared several years ago and correspondingly accountancy and financial policy is complicated item in a company. Therefore I’m interested in studying foreign statements in Accountancy and Financial management. By getting a strong theoretical base I’ll develop my existing knowledge and understanding of company accounts and company financial performance. My studies would also provide new professional skills and help me create unique business solutions in practice.