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Mobile Mania
When I got this essay I decided to be open for new information and other opinions than my own,
I also decided that first after I have studied the text-boxes carefully, I would make my own opinions about them.
I have a mobile phone myself, and I believe it is making my point of view a little better, compared to a person, who does not have a mobile phone. (The opinion that I agree less with of the six,) is the one telling, that teenagers have to take jobs to pay their Call cards or bills, and because of those jobs, they do not have time to study at home. My parents would never allow me to take jobs for paying my phonebills. If my phonebills were extremely high I believe that my parents just would take away my mobile phone.
The opinion with the headline ”Connected – not forgotten” I do not quite agree with either.
Because it is saying ”teenagers”, like if they are all the same, and all teenagers do not feel forgotten and ”switched-off”, if they are not in contact with everybody all the time. Ofcourse teenagers are equal on many levels, but that does not mean teenagers are all the same. It is the same as if you say all ”old people” like to play bingo.
The sentence ”Brain may be damaged” worries me a lot. Experts and doktors are telling us almost every day, how dangerous it is to talk on mobile phones, and I am sure it is true. To be sure, not to damage your brain, I think it would be a very good idea to have a headset in your mobile phone, because then your head and your mobile phone do not have any contact at all. This idea is not a fact, but I am pretty sure it would work.
I disagree with the idea that there should be laws against mobile phones in school. I do not see it as a big problem at my school, and I think it would take more time to collect all mobile phones, than it would take if a mobile phone suddenly rang during class. I always set my mobile phone on soundless when I am in school, and (in my opinion) it is a good way to avoid undesirable noises.
In connection with exams it is obvious that you can not bring your mobile phone, because of the problem of cheating.
In the last text-box saying “Drivers are distracted” I totally agree. Because I think you have to focus on the road, and not anything else, when you drive, also because it is not just your own life which is in danger if you do a mistake.
Jarl From Denmark
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