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julielai  #140408  Thu, 22 Sep 05 01:22 AM

HI Dmitrij,

Is this another IELTS essay question?

Thanks!

  
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Anonymous  #141023  Fri, 23 Sep 05 03:23 PM
Hi everyone,

Yes, it is another IELTS exersize. I might continue unless you want me to stop.

I don't mean to bother you often, though.

Best wishes,
Dmitrij.
  
julielai  #141067  Fri, 23 Sep 05 05:48 PM
No, by all means continue.  We can all use the tips. :-)
  
Dmitrij  #141143  Fri, 23 Sep 05 10:58 PM

Hi everybody,

It is another essay.

TASK

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. Attending a live performance (for example a play, concert or sporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answers.

ESSAY

Whether to attend a live event or stay at home to watch it on TV depends ultimately on your character. Some people dislike the thought of joining the army of concertgoers; others would never miss the chance. As for me, I think the benefits of watching an event on TV far outweigh those of going out for a live performance.

There are several negatives to attending live shows that make it a tough experience. The problems may arise at the very beginning. Some pessimism appears when your ticket shows that you are a happy owner of the seat 137 in the 48th row. Everything in the distance further than 50 meters looks quite fuzzy unless you are wisely equipped with binoculars. Then, probably, you might be dismayed if you lose the battle against eager fans at the entrance of a stadium or a concert hall. Once again, you never feel that your adventures are over as you have got into your seat. You might be surprised to find out that your neighbour is a pretty unpleasant subject muffling performers with roars of dissatisfaction.

On the other hand, people who prefer television broadcasts are easily understood. First of all, confessed TV watchers value tranquility of their home environment.  They enjoy a concert or sporting event surrounded by their family members or close friends. Secondly, they say that the atmosphere at home is more democratic than at the stadium. You may say what you think about the performers without any fear of falling into a fierce confrontation turning eventually into a fight. Finally, watching a show on TV is the best value for money. You don’t have to buy tickets while you are surfing TV channels for an interesting event.

The world is beautiful through its diversity. People who love attending live shows will assert their inclination with good arguments. My own opinion is that watching a performance on TV is safer, more comfortable and much cheaper kind of entertainment.

Feel free to comment.

Regards,

Dmitrij.

  
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Dmitrij  #191715  Thu, 02 Feb 06 07:28 AM

Hi everybody,

Long time since I saw you last. I just forgot to say that I had passed my IELTS on 15 October in Moscow and got 7,5 in the writing section. It is up to you to decide whether the result is good or bad. I am satisfied - the score is all I need for all practical purposes. Let me thank all of you for the great fun I have had communicating with you. Well, my strategy works and I felt relaxed knowing there would be no dead ends when you have a good plan in mind. 

Wish you luck!

Dmitrij.  

  
Mister Micawber  #191762  Thu, 02 Feb 06 11:05 AM

7.5 out of 9 sounds pretty good to me, Dmitrij.  Congratulations.  What was your Overall Band Score?

  
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Dmitrij  #192459  Sat, 04 Feb 06 07:49 AM

Hi Mr. Micawber,

Glad to hear from you. My Overall Band Score totalled to 7,5 considering 7,5 in Writing, 7 in Listening, 7 in Reading and 8 in Speaking. I had planned to get something like that so my expectations came true. Although, I think I could have scored better in Writing should I decide not to write such short sentenses for the safety's sake.

Dmitrij.

  
Mister Micawber  #192501  Sat, 04 Feb 06 12:12 PM

Good plan, Dmitrij.  What is next on your agenda?

  
Dmitrij  #193243  Mon, 06 Feb 06 03:04 PM

Hi everybody,

You know, my grand plan actually was to help myself and, of course, people secure themselves from an unpredicted outcome during their IELTS exam. Your forum due to its remarkable organization and highly educated English teachers has become a perfect place for me to share my ideas with essayists all over the world and get necessary advice.

Nobody asked me to provide a paper from the IELTS Examination Board confirming my English skills. Surfing the Internet I just came across some information about IELTS and found passing this exam to be quite a competitive task to undertake.  About 3 months the preparation to IELTS had been occupying my mind and all my free time. It was really great. Now it is over - no time pressure, no sleepless nights in attempts to work out something useful, no heated discussions with Julielai (By the way, where are you, Julielai?). The mission completed.

I confess, I miss you guys. Seems like there are no stimuli to go on. But my love to English writing is still alive. I just don't know what to write and what for.

Faithfully yours,

Dmitrij.    

  

  
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