My favorite person

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Favorite person
My favorite person is my father who always cares me. Without my father’s inspiration I could never handle difficult situations. When I become sad, he encourages me most. For example, last night I was very depress about my upcoming results. He said,” hey, Young man don’t be sad, have belief in yourself.” On the other hand, he is very simple. He prefers simple living and deep thinking. He believes in hard working. As a whole, he is a great inspiration for me.
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1 commentMy favorite person is my father who always cares for me. Without my father’s inspiration I could would never be able to handle difficult situations. When I become sad, he encourages me most. For example, last night I was very depressed about my upcoming results., He he said,” hey Hey, Young young man, don’t be sad, have belief faith in yourself.” On the other hand, he is very simple. He prefers simple living and deep thinking. He believes in hard working. As a On the whole, he is a great inspiration for me.
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Hi sorry, it should read:

For example, last night I was very depressed about my upcoming results, so he said,” Hey, young man, don’t be sad, have faith in yourself.”

I added 'so' in this response.
1 comment Regarding could/would, I am sure there is a rule regarding when to use could and would, but to me as a native English speaker, 'could' sounds wrong.
Anonymous:
In the name of ALLAH my favorite personality is MUHAMMAD S.A.W.W...
he is sincere and honest person. pepol were call apellation ameen and sadiq. muslim bow before one God we should obey of ALLAH
Anonymous:
Absolutely he is also my best personality.
Anonymous:
good
Anonymous:
My favorite person is my teacher always help to my study.
Anonymous:
My favorite personality: THE PERSONALITY OF PROPHET MUHAMMAD
The Personality of the Prophet Muhammad
The Prophet Muhammad was known for good character throughout his life. He was known as: "The Honest" long before he received the message of Islam.
He was handsome, of medium height, very active, walked rapidly which forced his companions to race to keep up with him. People reported seeing light around his body and in his face, which they compared to the sun or the full moon. His skin was white and turned rosy from exposure to the sun. He had black eyes and a thick beard.
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