My favorite person

zunayeed:

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Favorite person
My favorite person is my father who always cares me. Without my father’s inspiration I could never handle difficult situations. When I become sad, he encourages me most. For example, last night I was very depress about my upcoming results. He said,” hey, Young man don’t be sad, have belief in yourself.” On the other hand, he is very simple. He prefers simple living and deep thinking. He believes in hard working. As a whole, he is a great inspiration for me.

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JoshStafford:

My favorite person is my father who always cares for me. Without my father’s inspiration I ~~could~~ would never be able to handle difficult situations. When I become sad, he encourages me most. For example, last night I was very depressed about my upcoming results., He he said,” ~~hey~~ Hey, ~~Young~~ young man, don’t be sad, have ~~belief~~ faith in yourself.” On the other hand, he is very simple. He prefers simple living and deep thinking. He believes in hard work~~ing~~. ~~As a~~ On the whole, he is a great inspiration for me.

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JoshStafford:

Hi sorry, it should read:

For example, last night I was very depressed about my upcoming results, so he said,” Hey, young man, don’t be sad, have faith in yourself.”

I added 'so' in this response.

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JoshStafford:

Regarding could/would, I am sure there is a rule regarding when to use could and would, but to me as a native English speaker, 'could' sounds wrong.

Anonymous:

In the name of ALLAH my favorite personality is MUHAMMAD S.A.W.W...
he is sincere and honest person. pepol were call apellation ameen and sadiq. muslim bow before one God we should obey of ALLAH

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