Princess Sara  +  335971 Mon, 05 Mar 07 04:55 PM Hi all,   I am Sara…. I usually write poetry in another language … other than English …   This is my first poem in English … I wrote it just today 5/3/2007 ….   Please have a look and feed me back  Your comments are highly appreciated   I love you all …….     &&&&&&&&&&&     I am missing you ….. I really do …. Oh baby oh ……. come and hug me……... forever …… endless hug ….. I want to live in your bosom …. my whole life …………..     I am missing you ….. I want to be with you …….. only you … near to you …….. dear to you … In your kind eyes………… I see the happiness ……. I feel the love …… I discover that …. life is more valuable with a soul mate …..     I am missing you Don't you miss my voice? my songs on the dark night? my little warm "hands" ………. I am missing all of you ………... Oh baby …… I am looking through the window ….. all the time ….. with a dream to see your shadow ……. carrying red rose to me……. filling my life with loud lovely laughs…. I will never be hopeless ……     &&&&&&&&&&&   Princess Sara Joined on Mon, Mar 5 2007 New Member 03

	Pucca  +  335990 Mon, 05 Mar 07 05:32 PM Ok..here is the comment you so much wished! Well, seems quite sad! ..but it's beautiful if it was you who wrote it  (I'm awful writing poem, well, I don't know how to write them! I liked this sentence.." life is more valuable with a soul mate" Pucca Joined on Sun, Aug 27 2006 Spain Senior Member 2,972

	Princess Sara  +  335994 Mon, 05 Mar 07 05:37 PM Dear Pucca nice to see your name here thank you for your reply, it means so much for me.... I will always remeber that you were the first one who reply on my first peom here ummmmmmm yes I wrote it and I know it is a little bit sad .....  I am missing somone it should be sad thank you again and again my friend .... Princess Sara

	Pucca  +  335998 Mon, 05 Mar 07 05:44 PM I'm honoured! wow..seems that I'll always be remember as "the first one who wrote a comment in you first poem" Well, you are right! It should be sad..but maybe you can write how beautiful it was being near him! That would make it..I don't know, something special! Pucca

	Princess Sara  +  336058 Mon, 05 Mar 07 07:23 PM Hi again Pucca you said "It should be sad..but maybe you can write how beautiful it was being near him!" dear just let him come back to me and I will write how beautiful it was being nera him looool this is a promise Princess Sara

	Neversaynever  +  336100 Mon, 05 Mar 07 10:09 PM It is the reflection of the emotions in a very simple way.. It is written to be understood.. I mean emotions expressed in an easiest way, and I liked it.. no need to be complicated (I couldn't express what I mean well, but.. anyway.. ) I appreciate your first attempt to write a poem in English.. You should continue Cheers,,, Neversaynever Joined on Wed, Nov 1 2006 Turkey Full Member 238 "In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life: It goes on..." Robert Frost