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Latest post Tue, Apr 14 2009 3:48 AM by AlpheccaStars. 2 replies.
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notset  +  696583 Sat, 11 Apr 09 10:56 AM
I would be very grateful for your comments :)


The topic is:


The birth rate in most developed countries is predicted to begin fall over the next 50 years. By 2030 it is estimated that over one third of the population in most developed countries will be aged 65 and over.

What effects will these predictions have on developed countries if they prove true? What can be done now to deal with this situation?


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Nowadays decreasing birth rate is common among world's richest countries. The situation, triggered by working middle-aged people, who are responsibly planning their parenthood, is predicted to become a huge problem in the future. Some possible consequences and the ways of reducing the negative effect should be discussed.


To begin with, the increasing percent of older people lowers the number of active workers, who maintain the economics. Therefore, in the future the minimum pensioner age is likely to be a lot of higher than it is currently. In addition, many countries will have bigger expenses on medicine, since there will be much more people to take care about. Also, the money matters could become substantially worse for both, younger and older people, as a result of greater funds required for pensions and the decline of workforce.


However, some actions could be taken now to prevent dramatic situation in the future. Firstly, the governments should encourage birth rate by offering decent support and making the decision to have children easier. Secondly, in order to adapt to the rapidly changing environment, people must learn whole life. In this dynamic century it is crucial to understand, that education is not only for youth, but also for elder. Obviously, it is the only way to fight with the ageing of society.


In conclusion, the next fifty years will become a considerable challenge to the most developed countries in the world. The question is how seriously it will be taken before affecting ordinary people.

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notset, 222 days ago
Still waiting for opinions:)
Best answer by AlpheccaStars  +  697316 Tue, 14 Apr 09 03:48 AM
I have made a few suggestions and comments in your text.


notset


Nowadays (nowadays is not a good word for formal writing. It is very informal.) a decreasing birth rate is common among the world's richest countries. (can you give a couple of examples to support this statement?)  The situation, triggered by working middle-aged people (actually the younger people, not middle-aged, have children.), who are responsibly planning their parenthood, is predicted to become a huge problem in the future. Some possible consequences and the ways of reducing the negative effects should (should?) be discussed.


To begin with, the increasing percentage of older (don't you mean retired? Lots of older people work)  people lowers the number of active workers, who maintain the economy. Therefore, in the future the minimum pensioner age is likely to be a lot of higher than it is currently. In addition, many countries will have bigger medical expenses on medicine, since there will be many much more people to take care  of (I don't understand your logic here - do you mean elderly people being taken care of in nursing homes?) about. Also, the money matters could become substantially worse for both, younger and older people, as a result of greater funds required for pensions and the decline of workforce. (fewer people get pensions than before. Are you talking about government social spending for the elderly?)


However, some actions could be taken now to prevent this dramatic situation in the future. Firstly, the governments should encourage a  higher birth rate by offering decent ( maternity, child?) support and make the decision to have children easier. Secondly, in order to adapt to the rapidly changing environment, people must learn during their whole life. In this dynamic century it is crucial to understand, that education is not only for the youth, but also for the elderly. Obviously, it is the only way to fight with the ageing of society. (How does learning improve the situation?)


In conclusion, the demographic changes predicted over next fifty years will become a considerable challenge to the most developed countries in the world. The question is how seriously it will be taken before it affects ordinary people.

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