Hi, I've written the motivation letter for postgraduated education, But i'm not sure it's a complete one or not?
Could anyone help me in this case? Here is my letter :
After graduated in software engineering in the year 2007, I decided to continue education in master level. I searched for most U.K and Europe universities, but that didn’t take me long to come to the conclusion that ***University is very appropriate and also reasonable.
It is located in the south coast of England and has easy access to the town. The university is one of the top 10 universities in the U.K. I’ve also read in it’s website that the university has a powerful researches’ units.
During my bachelor education and even before, I was keenly interested in computer soft wares and programming. Bachelor education cause me to see more systematically and engineering. I believe higher education would enable me to develop these skills further. The more informed you are the more ability you have to find solutions.
I know that studying abroad is not easy and has its difficulties, but I am confident that by relying on my perseverance and interest I can accomplish it.
I have more than 2 yeas of relevant experience job. It makes me more powerful in developing and designing software, touch Object Oriented Programming and use programming model and strategy to build solutions.
I know that ***University has an effective relation with industries. All its Academic Schools researches’ units work closely with industries. These qualities make me more eager to continue education in my interested field, to improve my skills and to well prepare myself for future job opportunities. That’s why I choose ***University