I am writing this to let you know my feelings for you. ive been holding my feelings back from u because im not sure what will happen to our friendship.  i know i may not ever show my feelings, but thats because i dont want you to feel uncomfortable around me if you didnt feel the same way.  for a while now i tried to get over the feelings i have for u and it would work but only for a few days, but after a few days ill be sitting there and ill think about u and how wonderful u are.  ive never ever felt this way about anyone and i cant even explain how it feels. its the best feeling in the world, but at the same time its not because we arnt together.  as time went on the feelings just got stronger and stronger and i cant hold back anymore, i need to tell u exactly how i feel.  i need you to know that i care for u deeply and i am always here for u no matter what.  That you are the most beautiful and stunning girl i have ever layed eyes on. i want you to know your the person i think about whenever im in a bad mood or working long hours, thinking of u puts a smile on my face when nothing else would.  You always have my unspoken passion Although I might not seem to care.  I just want you to know that i think your the most beautiful girl in the world, i care for you, and im here for you always whether we are just friends or more.


this letter is to my best friend, i need to tell her how i feel.  i know this letter needs some work, its just a rough draft, any pointers will be much apreciated

Hi Mr30rack,

The sentence in red is redundant since you're expressing your feelings now. I'm instead connecting the words 'friendship' and 'because'. Also you need a heading and an ending, something intimate since it's a love letter. You can change them into some other words if you so wish.

Best of luck,

Savvy

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Dear (your friend name),

I am writing this letter to let you know what I feel for you. I've been holding my feelings back(delete from you) because I was afraid of its outcome...if it would effect our  friendship, (I know I may not ever show my feelings, but thats) because i dont want you to feel uncomfortable (delete around me) if you didnt feel the same way as I do. I have been trying to get over my feelings for you since quite some time, but alas! all in vain.After a few days I just keep sitting there,thinking about you and how wonderful you are.  I've never ever felt this way about anyone before and i cant even explain what I feel inside.All I can say is its the best feeling in the world, but at the same time its not because we aren't together. 

As time goes on my feelings just get stronger and stronger and i cant hold myself back anymore, i need to tell u exactly how i feel.  i need you to know that i care for u deeply and i am always here for u no matter what. You are the most beautiful and stunning girl i have ever laid my eyes on. i want you to know you're the person i think about whenever I'm  in a bad mood or working long hours, thinking of u puts a smile on my face when nothing else works.  You always have my unspoken passion although I might not seem to care.  I just want you to know that i think you're the most beautiful girl in the world, i care for you, and I will always be here for you whether we are just friends or more.

Yours and only yours,

(your name)