Anonymous wrote:

Here It was my poem, That I was write this morning, Please correct any mistakes.   You cannot see the pain deep inside me I alway smile whenever you were happy with other guy But inside me, Like the flame burning my heart. You will never known how much I love you. Because you never love someone as much as I love you. No matter how you threaten me. But I still love you more. One thing I don't know why. I dosen't really matter how I try, But It keep falling. Please tell me how to get inside you.

Here is my poem I wrote this morning, Please correct any mistakes.

You cannot see the pain deep inside me

I would smile whenever you were happy with someone else

But inside me, flames kept burning my heart.

You will never known how much I love you.

Because you'll never love someone as much as I love you.

No matter how you threaten (?She actually threatens you?) me. I still love you more.

There's something I don't understand the matter of. (?Did you mean this?)

It doesn't really matter how hard I try, but I keep falling.

Please tell me how to get inside you (it is a bit rude).

Work on this...

Best Wishes,

                   =YoHf=