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Latest post Wed, Sep 15 2004 2:04 PM by Aismile. 3 replies.
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Aismile  +  45686 Wed, 15 Sep 04 02:04 PM
Hey, there
I am a new member here. I am so amazed to discover this website by chance. I love writing poems. I believe that writing shows us a way when there is no way. Here, I am going to post my pomems and share it with you guys. Comments are welcome, the more the better.Smile [:)]

Warm regards
Aismile

If...

If hate is in pain
Why not try the opposite, love
If love is too much
Why not try the easier, like
If life seems too tough
Why not try to accept
If spirit lives longer than the worldly life
Why not try to step back from the latter And make effort to purify the former If we all have to die
And if it is only a matter of time Why not try to spend everyday as the last day of our life
Then what should have been done would be done
And what should have been said would be said
The secret to happiness would be revealed Throughout this pursuit of beauty and love
Aismile
Joined on Wed, Sep 15 2004
New Member 07
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candle  +  46164 Sat, 18 Sep 04 03:57 PM
Hi,

I'm glad to know you Aismile, it's by chance today also I read your poem. It's great, meaningful. I like what you imagine, if... it's possible and easily doing as you say it really can heal the world.

All we have to do in our life is to win ourself as you say to try and to make effort to pass the difficult time in our life.

I'm not good at writing, I'll try one day and hope you read mine too.
candle
Joined on Fri, Aug 13 2004
Junior Member 79
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Aismile  +  46220 Sun, 19 Sep 04 12:29 AM
Hello, Candle,

Yes. The beauty of the world lies in our imagination even though it seems tough. Thanks so much for your comments on my poem. Just smile to our failure, which is a very good but rare opportunity to discover another wonderful aspect within our personality.

I am looking forward to reading yours.

Cheers
Aismile
Aismile
Raji  +  48192 Thu, 30 Sep 04 08:47 AM
Hi, Aismile

i came here after a long gap and really i m very glad to found new and nice sounds in this forum. I like your imagination and flow of words.

Thanks for sharing of ur words

Regards
Raji
Raji
Joined on Thu, Jul 29 2004
New Member 29
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