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Latest post Sun, May 14 2006 2:33 AM by Mister Micawber. 1 replies.
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MadeInUSSR  +  225112 Sat, 13 May 06 03:34 PM
My skin is blind
My dream is blue
I am here
To love you...

(I wrote it last year..... mama mia :-S )
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Mister Micawber  +  225217 Sun, 14 May 06 02:33 AM

I like the first two lines very much indeed.  They are direct, visual and imaginative.  Perhaps you could expand this into a longer piece.
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