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My poem to candce

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Latest post Sat, Nov 26 2005 7:18 AM by Mister Micawber. 1 replies.
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Anonymous  +  162797 Sat, 26 Nov 05 01:34 AM

To Candace Tedder.

                                                               

I am falling in love.

I want everyone to know it

 A girl that was sent from up abovechemas-microsoft-com:office:office" />>>

And I "definitely know it". >>

 >>

Being with you>>

I wouldn't have it any other way>>

Cause when I am with you>>

My winters always feel like May.>>

 >>

Your the girl I want to call honey>>

I know this sounds funny>>

But Girl, when I see you “my rainy days turn sunny".>>

 >>

The way you look in my eyes>>

I start to think>>

"Am I alive or is this a dream?">>

 Or Lord I pray is this all part of your great, big sceam.>>

  >>

You’re the girl I want for life>>

No matter what circumstances or strife>>

I will always care for you my girl>>

And cherish you as a rare, precious pearl.>>

 >>

 >>

Every time I see you my heart skips a beat>>

Candace I can't believe your sweeping me off my feet>>

You are and I pray always will be >>

The Girl I want and the Girl I need.>>

> >

>JW>
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Mister Micawber  +  162859 Sat, 26 Nov 05 07:18 AM

This sound more like a song.  Why the quotation marks?  Are you quoting other songs?  No need to-- they all copy one another's lyrics anyway.

You're the girl, not your.
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