Pea33  +  60247 Wed, 08 Dec 04 08:46 PM I just recently made a new thread of a poem then I thought I might as well just make a thread for all of my poems. So I guess I'll just post one here whenever I write a new one. Pea33 Joined on Wed, Dec 8 2004 New Member 43 Dance like you've never danced before

	Pea33  +  60248 Wed, 08 Dec 04 08:49 PM I feel as a failure When you're around here Much better than me As I could ever be So many friends So many talents I turn all these bends My feelings so valid I love you as ever But you hurt me forever I don't want to leave you But I can't believe you Pea33

	Pea33  +  60249 Wed, 08 Dec 04 08:50 PM I anyone has any suggestions on how to make my poems better please let me know. In Failure- I'm not sure how to end it, any suggestions? It doesn't seem right to me. Pea33

	Pea33  +  60250 Wed, 08 Dec 04 09:01 PM None of these thoughts go away and all the pain attached to them I wonder why I shot myself in the back again All of these people crowd me and all the things they say and then I wonder why they won't go away and then I turn around and see you, the pain I hate goes and then I cry and cover my face again Surrounded by embarassment and memories. -Inspired by a song by Linkin Park. Pea33

	Pea33  +  60252 Wed, 08 Dec 04 09:11 PM I feel broken inside, left behind Lost in my way on this accursed day I feel the hurt pound, afraid to turn around Don't want to see when I look at me. Pea33

	Pea33  +  60253 Wed, 08 Dec 04 09:19 PM I'm hurt, lost, confused and fooled. I cry inside, breath alone, scared of the unkown. Closed, done, tired and killed. My life is damaged and undone. Gonna getaway from the real, breakaway and heal. Erase the pain underneath. Get loose, forget the numb. Belong to a memory of hapiness. No longer wasted, lonely or hidden. On the floor. Pea33

	Pea33  +  61243 Mon, 13 Dec 04 11:03 PM Add somethings has to change dont know what or how to the end of "failure" Thanks too ybblueeyes for the suggestion for the ending! Pea33