deepa  +  22721 Wed, 18 Feb 04 05:13 AM sweetpea in the rain water Angry,wrinkled sweetpea is hoping to see the rain drops fall from the above tree But it's a long time from now to see any one dancing in the first rain in the street! There's no sign of moisture all around and been a long time to smell the wet ground! The sweetpea is now in it's dry yellows and is depressed to see it's dying plant fellows! deepa Joined on Tue, Nov 18 2003 Pondicherry ,India Regular Member 848 Education is a progressive discovery of our own ignorance!

	Bubr  +  22952 Fri, 20 Feb 04 01:16 PM Wow! That's not a girl's poetry! 'Angry' in the first line. 'Dancing in the first rain' and 'smell the wet ground' in the middle. 'Dying' in the last line. It feels like one rock back and forth on the swing. Good! Bubr Joined on Mon, Nov 10 2003 Full Member 437

	anita_a  +  58785 Thu, 02 Dec 04 01:59 AM Please don't mind my saying but there is a lot of distortion of thoughts from stanza to stanza.Well, maybe something is missing! anita_a Joined on Tue, Jul 27 2004 Sunny California Regular Member 822 Cheers,Anita