My self-introduce for tomorrow's interview.

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Following is my self-introduce for tomorrow's interview, and some sentences come from MountainHiker's Motivation Letters. I hope this introduce will lasts 3 to 5 minutes. Welcome everybody to put forward the suggestion and the criticism.
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Good morning Sir, I am glad to be here for this interview. First, let me thank you for finding time in the midst of pressing affairs. I am 25 years old and I am local.
I am seeking an opportunity to work with *** as Sales. My professional experience and my awareness of your unparalleled reputation have led me to want to work for your company.
I have a bachelor degree with a major in Mechanical and Electrical field. Graduated from the *** university in 2002. Over the past three years, I have worked with *** Co.,Ltd as Sales who responsible for the market of Hunan mainly. During this period, I have learnt much I learned the values of teamwork and commitment, how to win, how to work hard, how to concentrate and focus on goals, and how to balance my time and priorities. Additional experience in other fields such as graduation practice in factory and commercial negotiation also reinforces my value to your company.
I enjoy thinking, enjoy learning, enjoy working, able to bear work pressure.
In my free time, I often participate a lot of activities, such as table tennis?badminton, those can help me regulate my personal state.
I am expecting to become your colleague on some day. Because being offhand in advance, let’s leave it at that.
Thanks
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Hi,

Sorry we didn't get a chance to help before your interview but I hope it went well.
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Although the interview have gone, You can also give me some suggestion with my self-introduce, there is no time limit for this. Perhaps I can use it for the next one. come on, sir. thank you first.
Ok. However, this is difficult as there are big differences in what constitutes good manners or an appropriate way of expressing yourself in different cultures, so bear this in mind and tailor your little speech for your audience.

Good morning Sir, (What will you say if it is a woman?)

I am glad to be here for this interview. First, let me thank you for finding time in the midst of pressing affairs.

I am 25 years old and I am local. (I live locally sounds better)
I am seeking an opportunity to work with *** as Sales. (..IN sales or As a Sales representative/whatever).My professional experience and my awareness of your unparalleled reputation have led me to want to work for your company.
I have a bachelor degree with a major in Mechanical and Electrical field.Graduated from the *** university in 2002. Over the past three years, I have worked with *** Co.,Ltd as Sales (again, in sales or as a sales man/person/rep?) who responsible (with responsibility mainly) for the market of Hunan. During this period, I have learnt much(.) I learned the values of teamwork and commitment, how to win, how to work hard, how to concentrate and focus on goals, and how to balance my time and priorities. Additional experience in other fields such as graduation practice in factory and commercial negotiation also reinforces my value to your company.
I enjoy thinking, enjoy learning, enjoy working, (and I am )able to bear work pressure.
In my free time, I often participate (in) activities such as table tennis (and) badminton.

I am expecting to become your colleague on some day. (More tactful to say 'I would love to become you colleague/join the company)

Because being offhand in advance, let’s leave it at that. (This sentence makes no sense. 'Being offhand' means to be rude, inconsiderate, ill-mannered so I don't think that is whay you mean! In advance of what? 'Let's leave it at that' is a command, it sounds rather abrupt and ill-mannered to me, again I don't think this is what you meant. How about 'I would love to join your company and you would not regret giving me this opportunity.' and just finish with a smile!
Thanks
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2 comments Thank you very much, nona. following is revised edition?

I am glad to be here for this interview. First, let me thank you for finding time in the midst of pressing affairs.

I am 25 years old and I live locally.
I am seeking an opportunity to work with *** as a Sales representative.My professional experience and my awareness of your unparalleled reputation have led me to want to work for your company.
I have a bachelor degree with a major in Mechanical and Electrical field.Graduated from the *** university in 2002. Over the past three years, I have worked with *** Co.,Ltd as a Sales representative with responsibility mainly for the market of Hunan. During this period, I have learnt much. I learned the values of teamwork and commitment, how to win, how to work hard, how to concentrate and focus on goals, and how to balance my time and priorities. Additional experience in other fields such as graduation practice in factory and commercial negotiation also reinforces my value to your company.
I enjoy thinking, enjoy learning, enjoy working, and I am able to bear work pressure.
In my free time, I often participate in activities such as table tennis and badminton.

I would love to join your company and you would not regret giving me this opportunity.
ThanksEmotion: wink
can u help me..i have a prblm how to introduse myself in english.. 28.12 i have interview my job in kl..
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Anonymous:
it is too impressive but , in an introduction this much is not required
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Hai,

I am........, from .......... i completed my post graduation from ........university. i completed my graduation from....college. i have worked in .......organisation as ..........my strengths and weakness are...........................
Hi,

I think that what you say in this situation depends on the country and culture that you live in.

In N. America, I would be brief, and I would state the three main reasons that they should offer the job to me instead of to any of the other candidates.

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