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Latest post Fri, Apr 10 2009 4:46 AM by lady53. 0 replies.
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lady53  +  696238 Fri, 10 Apr 09 04:46 AM
Please i wrote this paragraph for an insurance report using sequences of events...i would like to be helped with the grammar.

DESCRIBE THE CIRCUMSTANCES OF THE LOSS/THEFT AN ITEM.

 

FOR EXAMPLE: A PROFESSIONAL VIDEO AOC CAMERA.

 

            My professional Video AOC Camera was stolen in circumstances when I just arrived to the parking lote at a Mall in La Molina.  As I am a cameraman I had to cover an important writer conference so as I was in a hurry I left my video camera on the front sit of my car while I tried to get the invitation from a long line the media people.

They were no more than a few minutes when i come back to my car in order to pick up the camera. When I looked in, my video camera had disappeared. I told the police officers then they checked the area and ask some people around, but there was no trace of my equipment. Some colegues told me they saw strangers around in suspicious actitud.

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