Lill.  +  422683 Sun, 23 Sep 07 08:26 PM I would need native English speakers' opinion whether these sentences are okay or not to write an essay. Please help me! The sentences are the following: "Although I wouldn't lend my books to Chris, I would my CDs to Helen." "I would like to get to know him as I would you." "Would you give John my regards? Of course I will Pete yours." "I would take care of her as I would my children." Thanks to those who reply Lill. Joined on Sun, Sep 23 2007 New Member 02 Essays, Regards

	WesternAmerican  +  422696 Sun, 23 Sep 07 09:42 PM  Anonymous wrote: I would need native English speakers' opinion whether these sentences are okay or not to write an essay. Please help me! The sentences are the following: "Although I wouldn't lend my books to Chris, I would lend my CDs to Helen."  "I would like to get to know him as much as I would like to get to know you." "Would you give John my regards? Of course I will, Pete."  -yours "I would take care of her as I would take  my children."  I will take care of her as if she were one of my children. Thanks to those who reply Dear Anonymous, Even though I'm not a native speaker, above are my amendments to your sentences. WesternAmerican Joined on Wed, Jun 6 2007 Israel Full Member 393 I will REALLY appreciate any corrections to my posts, whether it be grammar, glossary, or just something that could elevate my style. Thank you. Regards, Essays

	Philip  +  422698 Sun, 23 Sep 07 09:45 PM  Anonymous wrote: I would need native English speakers' opinion whether these sentences are okay or not to write an essay. Please help me! The sentences are the following: "Although I wouldn't lend my books to Chris, I would my CDs to Helen." o.k. "I would like to get to know him as I would you." o.k. "Would you give John my regards? Of course I will Pete yours." This doesn't flow well. "I would take care of her as I would my  own children." Thanks to those who reply "and I will give Pete yours" is better. Philip Joined on Thu, Jun 23 2005 Veteran Member 8,726 At reise er at leve! - H. C. Andersen Regards, Essays

	Pucca  +  422703 Sun, 23 Sep 07 09:53 PM Lill.       The replies are in this thread!  Pucca Joined on Sun, Aug 27 2006 Spain Senior Member 2,972

	Lill.  +  422716 Sun, 23 Sep 07 10:14 PM Thanks for the replies! (I was the one who started the topic, though at a different place, don't know how it got here.) Lill.