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Latest post Mon, Jun 4 2007 6:50 AM by Liveinjapan. 3 replies.
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Liveinjapan  +  374671 Mon, 04 Jun 07 03:21 AM

Hi everyone

Does this sound natural to you?
Does it make sense?

I think next time I can do what is better than what I did before.
 
Thanks
LiJ
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Please feel free to correct any words I wrote.LiJ
Toronto2001  +  374683 Mon, 04 Jun 07 04:19 AM
I would say "I think that next time, I can do better than I did before."

Conversationally, you could say "I think next time, I can do better than before."  In written, non-conversational English, the first is better.

When you are writing, the difference between conversation and regular text is how it sounds, not how it is read. If it sounds like conversation, it should be in quotation marks. I hope this helps.
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CalifJim  +  374735 Mon, 04 Jun 07 06:34 AM
<I think next time I can do what is better than what I did before.>

It makes sense, but it isn't natural.

Too many words and syntactic complications.  It can be done much more simply:

I think next time I can do better than before.


CJ
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Liveinjapan  +  374745 Mon, 04 Jun 07 06:50 AM

I understand. Smile [:)]

> "I think that next time, I can do better than I did before."
>" I tinnk that next time I can do better than before."

Thank you all. Smile [:)]Smile [:)]Smile [:)]

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